Shopping— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答有點不自然，句子結構不完整，且有語法錯誤。建議使用完整句子並避免重複，例如將「Go to shopping at the marketing or shopping mall」改為「I usually go shopping at markets or shopping malls」。

例: Yes, I enjoy shopping on weekends or holidays. I usually go with my mother or friends to markets or shopping malls to buy things we like.

提案: 回答中有語法錯誤和用詞不當，例如「compare price」應為「compare prices」。建議使用連接詞使句子更流暢，如「because comparing prices helps me find the cheaper option」。

例: Yes, I compare prices when I shop because comparing prices helps me find the cheaper option and save money.

提案: 句子結構不清晰且語法錯誤，建議使用更自然的表達方式，例如「I usually hesitate when shopping, so I ask my friend to help me decide」。

例: Yes, I usually hesitate when shopping, so I ask my friend to help me make decisions.

提案: 回答中有語法錯誤且表達不夠清楚。建議使用更自然的句子結構，如「I don't think expensive products are always better because cheaper ones can also be valuable and useful」。

例: No, I don't think expensive products are always better because cheaper ones can also be valuable and very useful for me.

× I will keep up with my mother or my friend. Go to shopping at the marketing or shopping mall to purchase something we love.

✓ I will keep up with my mother or my friend. Go shopping at the market or shopping mall to purchase something we love.

The phrase 'Go to shopping' is incorrect because 'go' is followed by the verb in -ing form without 'to'. Also, 'marketing' is a wrong word here; the correct word is 'market'. So, it should be 'Go shopping at the market or shopping mall'.

× Yes, I will compare price when I shop because compare price can let me know which cheaper than others and I will choose cheaper one.

✓ Yes, I will compare prices when I shop because comparing prices can let me know which is cheaper than others and I will choose the cheaper one.

The word 'price' should be plural 'prices' because multiple prices are compared. Also, 'compare price' should be 'comparing prices' to function as a gerund subject. Additionally, 'which cheaper' needs 'which is cheaper' for correct sentence structure. 'Cheaper one' should be 'the cheaper one' to specify the choice.

× Yes, I usually hesitate when I shop so I usually ask my friend to let her decide help me.

✓ Yes, I usually hesitate when I shop, so I usually ask my friend to help me decide.

The original sentence has awkward structure and incorrect word order. 'Let her decide help me' is incorrect; it should be 'ask my friend to help me decide'. Also, a comma is needed before 'so' to separate the clauses.

× No, I don't think so, because something cheaper products are always valuable and great useful for me. So expensive products not a way better than cheaper ones.

✓ No, I don't think so, because some cheaper products are always valuable and very useful for me. So expensive products are not always better than cheaper ones.

'Something cheaper products' is incorrect; it should be 'some cheaper products'. 'Great useful' is incorrect; 'very useful' is appropriate. 'Not a way better' is incorrect; it should be 'are not always better'. Also, the verb 'are' is missing before 'not always better'.