Shopping— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“new addresses”应为“new dresses”，且句子结构较为混乱。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，使用更准确的词汇表达。

例: Yes, I like shopping, especially for new dresses and makeup. Shopping for beautiful things makes me feel relaxed and happy.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整的问题，句子不连贯且重复。建议使用连贯的句子表达观点，并补充完整的内容。

例: Yes, I always compare prices because I want to buy good quality items at a lower price. For example, once I compared two tops and found the cheaper one was better quality.

提案: 回答较为自然，但部分表达不够准确，如“pick wide”应为“pick wisely”。建议注意用词准确性，并适当使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, I find it difficult to make choices when shopping, especially with so many beautiful dresses available. It's hard to pick wisely, especially when I have a limited budget.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整的问题，句子结尾不完整。建议使用完整句子表达观点，并避免重复。

例: No, I don't think expensive products are always better. Sometimes, cheaper items have better quality than expensive branded ones.

× I mean I'm a girl and girls can't say no to shopping, especially shopping for the new addresses or some makeups.

✓ I mean I'm a girl and girls can't say no to shopping, especially shopping for new clothes or some makeup.

“addresses”和“makeups”用法错误，应该用复数形式“clothes”表示衣服，“makeup”是不可数名词，不能加复数。

× it really makes me feel relax, relaxed when I shopping and I do like that.

✓ it really makes me feel relaxed when I am shopping and I do like that.

“feel”后应接形容词“relaxed”而非动词原形“relax”；“when I shopping”缺少助动词，应为“when I am shopping”。

× I compared two different price with two tops and I found that the lower price with the better quality.

✓ I compared two different prices with two tops and I found that the lower price had better quality.

“price”应使用复数形式“prices”；“with”用法不当，应改为“had”表示拥有。

× I found that the lower price with the better quality.

✓ I found that the lower price had better quality.

句中缺少动词“had”，需要用过去时态表示过去的状态。

× And now I.

✓ And now I do the same.

句子不完整，缺少谓语动词，导致表达不清。

× There were tons of beautiful dresses.

✓ There were tons of beautiful dresses.

此句无错误，复数使用正确。

× It's hard to pick wide among these thousands of clothes like that, especially with limited budget.

✓ It's hard to pick wisely among these thousands of clothes like that, especially with a limited budget.

“pick wide”用法错误，应为副词“wisely”；“limited budget”前应加不定冠词“a”。

× especially with limited budget.

✓ especially with a limited budget.

“budget”前缺少冠词，应加不定冠词“a”。

× I found that the same dresses with different prices and I found a cheaper one with better quality.

✓ I found the same dress with different prices and I found a cheaper one with better quality.

“dresses”应为单数“dress”，表示同一款式的衣服。

× And yeah, I don't think the price means.

✓ And yeah, I don't think the price means everything.

句子不完整，缺少宾语，导致表达不清。