Shopping— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ваш ответ звучит немного неестественно и неполно. Постарайтесь давать более прямой и связный ответ, избегая излишних извинений и неполных предложений. Например, объясните, почему вам нравится делать покупки, используя простые и понятные выражения.

例: Yes, I like shopping because it helps me relax and find things I need. I especially enjoy looking for new clothes and accessories that suit my style.

提案: Ваш ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и звучит неестественно. Рекомендуется использовать правильные структуры предложений и более точные выражения, чтобы ясно объяснить причину сравнения цен.

例: Yes, I always compare prices because I have a limited budget and want to get the best value for my money.

提案: Ответ содержит ошибки в грамматике и структуре, а также нечеткие выражения. Постарайтесь использовать более простые и правильные предложения, чтобы ясно выразить свою мысль.

例: No, it's not difficult for me to make choices because I usually know exactly what I need and when I want to buy it.

提案: Ваш ответ слишком длинный и содержит извинения, которые не нужны. Лучше дать более прямой и логичный ответ, объясняя свое мнение с конкретными причинами.

例: Sometimes expensive products are better because they often have higher quality, but cheaper products can also be good if you choose carefully.

× I am a shopaholic because I am very enthusiastic in.

✓ I am a shopaholic because I am very enthusiastic about shopping.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used after 'enthusiastic'. The correct preposition to express interest or excitement about something is 'about'. Therefore, 'enthusiastic about shopping' is the correct phrase.

× I'm not a very rich person who don't look at prices items.

✓ I'm not a very rich person who doesn't look at prices of items.

The relative pronoun 'who' refers to 'person', which is singular, so the verb should be 'doesn't' instead of 'don't'. Also, 'prices items' is incorrect; it should be 'prices of items' to correctly express the relationship.

× Thereby choices is opportunities to choose easily for me.

✓ Therefore, choices are opportunities to choose easily for me.

The subject 'choices' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, 'thereby' is incorrectly used; 'therefore' is more appropriate to indicate a conclusion or result.

× It sounds boastful or too much unrealistic, but I am a very materialist person and I love expensive products, which is luxury.

✓ It sounds boastful or too unrealistic, but I am a very materialistic person and I love expensive products, which are luxurious.

The phrase 'too much unrealistic' is incorrect; 'too unrealistic' is correct. 'Materialist' should be 'materialistic' as an adjective describing a person. 'Which is luxury' is incorrect because 'products' is plural; it should be 'which are luxurious'.