Shopping— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够连贯且有语法错误，表达不自然。建议使用完整句子，避免重复和不相关内容，保持答案简洁且聚焦主题。

例: Yes, I enjoy shopping because it allows me to find interesting items and sometimes try delicious treats like gingerbread.

提案: 回答过于简短且语法错误，缺乏完整句子和详细解释。建议用完整句子回答，并说明比较价格的原因。

例: Yes, I always compare prices because it helps me save money and find the best deals.

提案: 回答较长但语法和表达不够准确，建议简化句子结构，使用连接词使表达更流畅，并注意时态和冠词的使用。

例: Yes, it is difficult for me to make choices when shopping because I like many things, but I have limited money, so I have to decide carefully what to buy.

提案: 回答表达不清晰，语法错误较多。建议用更准确的句子表达观点，并举例说明。

例: No, I don't think expensive products are always better because sometimes cheaper products have good quality too.

× I like shopping 'cause I can buy some interesting things when with shopping and I can eat the gingerbread or, well, beautiful clothes.

✓ I like shopping 'cause I can buy some interesting things while shopping and I can eat gingerbread or, well, buy beautiful clothes.

句中“when with shopping”结构不正确，应使用“while shopping”表示“在购物的时候”。此外，句尾“eat the gingerbread or, well, beautiful clothes”逻辑不通，应该是“eat gingerbread or buy beautiful clothes”，保持动作一致。

× Is a economical way.

✓ It is an economical way.

句子缺少主语，应加上“It”作为主语，且“a economical”中“economical”以元音音素开头，应使用“an”而非“a”。

× it's difficult for me to make choice when I shopping, because I think everything is good and I want to buy everything, but I don't have enough money, so it's difficult to make a choice which ones I really, really want to buy it.

✓ it's difficult for me to make choices when I am shopping, because I think everything is good and I want to buy everything, but I don't have enough money, so it's difficult to make a choice about which ones I really, really want to buy.

“make choice”应为复数“make choices”，表示做出多个选择；“when I shopping”缺少助动词，应为“when I am shopping”；“make a choice which ones I really want to buy it”结构不完整，需改为“make a choice about which ones I really want to buy”，去掉多余的“it”。

× No, I don't think the expensive product is the best because I think it depends on their quality.

✓ No, I don't think expensive products are the best because I think it depends on their quality.

“the expensive product”应为复数“expensive products”，因为后文提到“their quality”，指代复数。主谓一致需保持一致。

× It's such expensive products just besides on their significant powers.

✓ Such expensive products depend mainly on their significant features.

原句结构混乱，“just besides on”用法错误，应改为“depend mainly on”表示“主要依赖于”；“significant powers”表达不准确，改为“significant features”更符合语境。