Shopping— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: თქვენი პასუხი უნდა იყოს უფრო ბუნებრივი და ნაკლებად განმეორებითი. შეეცადეთ თავიდან აიცილოთ ზედმეტი სიტყვები და გაუმჯობესოთ წინადადებების სტრუქტურა.

例: Yes, I enjoy shopping. In the past, I used to visit physical stores, but now I prefer online shopping because it is more convenient and saves time.

提案: თქვენი პასუხი უნდა იყოს უფრო მკაფიო და ლოგიკური. გამოიყენეთ დაკავშირებული სიტყვები და გამოთქვით აზრი უფრო ზუსტად.

例: Yes, I always compare prices because I have a limited budget and want to make sure I get the best value for my money.

提案: თქვენი პასუხი ძალიან მოკლეა და არ არის ნათელი. შეეცადეთ უფრო დეტალურად ახსნათ თქვენი აზრი და გამოიყენოთ შესაბამისი ლექსიკა.

例: No, I find it easy to make choices when shopping because I usually know what I want and stick to my preferences.

提案: თქვენი პასუხი უნდა იყოს უფრო ორგანიზებული და ნათელი. გამოიყენეთ დაკავშირებული სიტყვები და დეტალურად აღწერეთ თქვენი გამოცდილება.

例: No, I don't think expensive products are always better. For example, I once bought an expensive item that turned out to be of poor quality compared to a cheaper alternative.

× I used to go to the, uh, magazines

✓ I used to go to the, uh, magazines store

The word 'magazines' is a plural noun referring to printed publications, but the student likely meant a place to buy magazines, such as a 'magazine store' or 'magazine shop'. The definite article 'the' is correctly used here, but the noun needs to be specified correctly to make sense.

× but now I it replaced with online shopping

✓ but now it has been replaced with online shopping

The original sentence lacks proper subject-verb agreement and correct verb tense. 'I it replaced' is incorrect; the correct passive construction is 'it has been replaced' to indicate a change that happened in the past and continues to the present.

× I really prefer online shopping rather than live shopping

✓ I really prefer online shopping to live shopping

The verb 'prefer' is typically followed by 'to' when comparing two things, not 'rather than'. Therefore, 'prefer online shopping to live shopping' is the correct form.

× prices so are one of the most important part when I uh, shopping

✓ prices are one of the most important parts when I shop

The phrase 'prices so are' is incorrect; 'prices are' is correct. Also, 'part' should be plural 'parts' because 'prices' is plural. Additionally, 'when I uh, shopping' should be 'when I shop' to use the correct verb form.

× I am depend on my salary

✓ I depend on my salary

The verb 'depend' does not require the auxiliary verb 'am'. The correct form is 'I depend on my salary'.

× I am very convenient customer in the shop

✓ I am a very convenient customer in the shop

The adjective 'convenient' is incorrectly used to describe a person. Possibly, the student meant 'easy-going' or 'easy customer'. Also, the article 'a' is missing before 'very convenient customer'.

× I had an experience when I buy, I bought a expensive product

✓ I had an experience when I bought an expensive product

The verb 'buy' should be in past tense 'bought' to match the past context. Also, 'a expensive' should be 'an expensive' because 'expensive' starts with a vowel sound.

× but it was really bad thing cheaper

✓ but it was really worse than the cheaper one

The phrase 'really bad thing cheaper' is ungrammatical. The student likely meant to say the expensive product was worse than the cheaper one. The comparative form 'worse' is appropriate here, and the sentence needs to be restructured for clarity.