Shopping— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lặp lại và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, đồng thời giải thích rõ lý do bạn thích mua sắm.

例: Yes, I like shopping because it allows me to buy things I need and also gifts for my family, like phones for my grandparents and parents.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu có cấu trúc rõ ràng để diễn đạt ý tưởng. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và giải thích lý do một cách cụ thể.

例: No, I usually don't compare prices because I don't pay much attention to them, but sometimes I feel disappointed if I find a better price later.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc. Hãy cố gắng nói câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lặp từ và giải thích rõ ràng cảm xúc của bạn khi mua sắm.

例: Yes, I find it difficult to make choices when shopping because I often feel overwhelmed and lose interest in the process.

提案: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng và có cấu trúc, tránh nói lắp và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp để diễn đạt ý kiến của mình một cách logic.

例: I don't think expensive products are always better than cheaper ones. Sometimes, cheaper products can have good quality and surprise me.

× Yes, I like shopping because I can buy something I want and I can buy my phone for grandparents and parents.

✓ Yes, I like shopping because I can buy things I want and I can buy phones for my grandparents and parents.

The word 'something' should be plural 'things' to match the context of buying multiple items. Also, 'my phone for grandparents and parents' is incorrect because it implies one phone for multiple people; it should be 'phones for my grandparents and parents' to indicate multiple phones. This corrects the singular and plural usage.

× No, I don't commit price because I don't care, but anything is disappointed with me and when I shopping when those comeback price.

✓ No, I don't compare prices because I don't care, but sometimes I am disappointed when I shop and the prices change.

The phrase 'commit price' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'compare prices'. 'Anything is disappointed with me' is incorrect; it should be 'sometimes I am disappointed'. 'When I shopping' should be 'when I shop'. 'Those comeback price' is unclear and corrected to 'the prices change'. These corrections address verb usage and sentence clarity.

× Yes, it's a it's a because I no, I, I miss joy when it's shopping. I feel difficult with me, but I think this one did because I don't like.

✓ Yes, it's difficult because I don't enjoy shopping. I find it hard, and I think this is because I don't like it.

The original sentence has unclear pronoun use and structure. 'I miss joy' should be 'I don't enjoy'. 'I feel difficult with me' is incorrect; it should be 'I find it hard'. 'This one did' is unclear and corrected to 'this is'. Proper pronoun and sentence structure improve clarity.

× Yes, I think because it's expensive product. Hmm, not always better. Surprise me. Cheap, broader speaker, I think quality.

✓ Yes, I think because it's an expensive product. However, it's not always better. It surprises me that cheap, broader speakers can have good quality.

The phrase 'it's expensive product' lacks an article; it should be 'an expensive product'. 'Not always better' needs a subject and verb for clarity. 'Surprise me' should be 'It surprises me'. 'Cheap, broader speaker' is unclear and corrected to 'cheap, broader speakers'. These corrections improve adjective use and sentence clarity.