Shopping— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more concise and natural by avoiding repetition and correcting grammar. Also, add linking words to improve coherence.

例: Yes, I enjoy shopping because it's fun to find new things. I usually go with my friends when I need new clothes, which makes the experience more enjoyable.

提案: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Make sure to directly answer the question with a clear reason, and use proper sentence structure.

例: No, I usually don't compare prices because I don't have much time when I shop, so I prefer to buy what I need quickly.

提案: Your answer is generally clear but could be improved by using more natural phrasing and linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: No, it's not difficult for me to make choices because I usually know what I want before I go shopping, so I can decide quickly.

提案: Your answer is confusing and contains grammatical errors. Try to clearly express your opinion with supporting reasons and avoid filler words like 'uh'.

例: I don't think expensive products are always better because sometimes cheaper items can be just as good. Therefore, I don't always trust that higher price means better quality.

× Yes, I like shopping because it's fun to find new thing and I love shopping and I go with my friends when I need when I need new clothes.

✓ Yes, I like shopping because it's fun to find new things and I love shopping and I go with my friends when I need new clothes.

The word 'thing' should be plural 'things' because it refers to multiple items found while shopping. Using the singular form here is incorrect when talking about more than one item.

× No, I didn't compare price because I don't have time to prefer to like.

✓ No, I didn't compare prices because I don't have time to do that.

The word 'price' should be plural 'prices' because when shopping, people usually compare multiple prices, not just one. Also, the phrase 'prefer to like' is unclear and incorrect; it was replaced with 'do that' for clarity.

× No, I didn't compare price because I don't have time to prefer to like.

✓ No, I didn't compare prices because I didn't have time to do that.

The sentence mixes past tense 'didn't compare' with present tense 'don't have time'. To maintain tense consistency, 'don't have time' should be changed to 'didn't have time' to match the past tense context.

× No, it's not difficult for me because I already choose shopping.

✓ No, it's not difficult for me because I already choose what to buy when shopping.

The phrase 'choose shopping' is incorrect because 'shopping' is an activity, not an object to choose. The correction clarifies that the student chooses what to buy, which fits the context better.

× I don't think uh, expensive product are always better because sometimes they are cheap and I don't trust the we are like.

✓ I don't think, uh, expensive products are always better because sometimes they are cheap and I don't trust them.

The word 'product' should be plural 'products' to agree with the plural verb 'are'. Also, 'the we are like' is unclear and incorrect; it was replaced with 'them' to refer back to the products.