Shopping— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答は全体的に良いですが、'Ideally, SH like shopping'の部分は不自然で誤りがあります。'SH'は意味不明で、'I'を使うべきです。また、'a special time'は不自然なので、より自然な表現に直しましょう。文の長さは適切で、内容も具体的です。

例: I like shopping, especially at the mall near my house because it has many shops where I can buy everything from clothes to electronics. Moreover, shopping helps me relax, so I often enjoy window shopping with my friends.

提案: 回答は明確で内容も具体的ですが、'shop something'は不自然で、'shop for something'や'shop'だけにするのが良いです。また、'the their prices'は誤りです。接続詞の使い方は良いので、細かい文法の修正をしましょう。

例: I always compare prices when I shop because even if the quality is similar, prices can vary a lot. For example, I check different websites and stores to find the best deal and save money.

提案: 回答は内容が伝わりますが、'to to'の重複や、最後の文が不完全で意味が伝わりにくいです。文の終わりは明確にしましょう。また、'the whole shopping'は不自然なので、'shopping experience'など具体的に表現しましょう。

例: Yes, I find it quite difficult to make choices when I shop because I am not very decisive. I usually spend a lot of time comparing products before I finally decide, which makes the whole shopping experience longer.

提案: 回答は意図は伝わりますが、多くの文法ミスと不自然な表現があります。'ex more excellent'や'cheap rope'は誤りで、意味が不明です。より簡潔で正確な表現を心がけましょう。

例: No, I don't think expensive products are always better than cheaper ones. Sometimes, cheaper products can have very good quality.

× Ideally, SH like shopping, especially at the shopping mall near my house.

✓ Ideally, I like shopping, especially at the shopping mall near my house.

The pronoun 'SH' is incorrect and should be replaced with 'I' to correctly refer to oneself in English.

× Ideally, SH like shopping, especially at the shopping mall near my house.

✓ Ideally, I like shopping, especially at the shopping mall near my house.

When using the first person singular pronoun 'I', the verb should be 'like' without an 's'. The original sentence incorrectly uses 'like' with an incorrect pronoun.

× Therefore, I often spend a special time doing window shopping with my friend.

✓ Therefore, I often spend special time doing window shopping with my friend.

The phrase 'a special time' is unnatural here; 'special time' without 'a' is more appropriate. Also, 'my friend' is correct if referring to one friend; if more, it should be 'my friends'.

× I always compare prices when I shop something because even if the quality of goods is similar, the their prices can vary a lot.

✓ I always compare prices when I shop for something because even if the quality of goods is similar, their prices can vary a lot.

The pronoun 'the their' is incorrect; 'their' alone is sufficient. Also, 'shop something' should be 'shop for something' to be grammatically correct.

× I always compare prices when I shop something because even if the quality of goods is similar, the their prices can vary a lot.

✓ I always compare prices when I shop for something because even if the quality of goods is similar, their prices can vary a lot.

The verb 'shop' requires the preposition 'for' when followed by an object, so 'shop something' should be 'shop for something'.

× Yes, I find it quite challenging to to make choices when I buy something.

✓ Yes, I find it quite challenging to make choices when I buy something.

There is a repeated word 'to to' which is a typographical error and should be corrected to a single 'to'.

× This makes the whole shopping.

✓ This makes the whole shopping experience difficult.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a noun after 'shopping'. Adding 'experience difficult' completes the thought and makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× Well, I do not think so, No.

✓ Well, I do not think so, no.

The word 'No' should not be capitalized mid-sentence and is better as 'no' to maintain proper sentence flow.

× Expensive products are not necessarily ex more excellent than the cheap one.

✓ Expensive products are not necessarily more excellent than the cheap ones.

The word 'ex' is incorrect and should be removed. Also, 'the cheap one' should be plural 'the cheap ones' to match 'products'.

× This is because there are many things which is which quality is so good even with cheap rope.

✓ This is because there are many things whose quality is so good even with cheap price.

The phrase 'which is which quality' is incorrect; 'whose quality' is the correct relative pronoun for possession. Also, 'cheap rope' seems to be a typo and should be 'cheap price' or 'cheap products'.