Shopping— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it could be more concise and natural by avoiding repetition and improving sentence structure. Try to combine ideas smoothly and use linking words to enhance coherence.

例: Yes, I love shopping, especially for my baby. I enjoy buying cute clothes for her and often take photos when she wears them because it makes me happy.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to use more precise vocabulary and link your ideas smoothly to improve clarity.

例: Yes, I always compare prices to save money and ensure I buy clothes that offer good value. I usually check different brands and prices before making a purchase.

提案: Your answer is incomplete and lacks coherence. Try to complete your thoughts fully and use linking words to connect ideas logically. Also, avoid abrupt endings and provide specific details.

例: Yes, it can be difficult to make choices when shopping because I have to consider many factors. For instance, when buying shoes, I compare different brands and prices to find the best option.

提案: Your answer conveys your opinion but lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly with complete sentences and provide specific examples to support your point.

例: I don't believe expensive products are always better than cheaper ones. For example, I once bought an affordable piece of clothing that was of better quality than some expensive items I've seen.

× I like to buy cute clothes for my baby and let her wear it.

✓ I like to buy cute clothes for my baby and let her wear them.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrect because it refers to a singular noun, but 'clothes' is plural. The correct pronoun to refer to plural nouns is 'them'. Use 'them' to match the plural noun 'clothes'.

× I want to buy a clothes that is worth it.

✓ I want to buy clothes that are worth it.

The word 'clothes' is plural and should not be preceded by the singular article 'a'. Also, the verb should agree with the plural subject, so 'is' changes to 'are'. Remove 'a' and use 'are' to correct the sentence.

× I always compare different types of clothes with different prices before I buy it.

✓ I always compare different types of clothes with different prices before I buy them.

The pronoun 'it' is singular but refers to 'clothes', which is plural. The correct pronoun is 'them' to match the plural noun.

× So it's.

✓ So it is difficult to choose.

The sentence 'So it's.' is incomplete and unclear. It lacks a main verb and object. Completing the sentence clarifies the meaning and improves sentence structure.

× I don't think expensive products are always better than cheaper ones because there are affordable clothes that are even better to some expensive clothes.

✓ I don't think expensive products are always better than cheaper ones because there are affordable clothes that are even better than some expensive clothes.

The preposition 'to' is incorrect in this comparison. The correct preposition is 'than' when making comparisons between two things.

× So example I bought one clothes and it was good compared to the expensive.

✓ For example, I bought one piece of clothing and it was good compared to the expensive ones.

The word 'clothes' is plural and cannot be used with 'one'. Use 'one piece of clothing' for singular. Also, 'the expensive' is incomplete; 'the expensive ones' correctly refers to expensive clothes.