Work— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答缺乏直接回应问题的主题句，且表达不够清晰自然。建议先直接回答是学生还是工作者，然后简洁说明专业和兴趣，避免语法错误和冗余。

예시: I am currently a student majoring in international trade and economics because I am very interested in how countries exchange goods and services. I hope to work in a global company after graduation, and studying this subject helps me understand the world better.

제안: 回答不清楚且语法混乱，未能直接回答工作地点。建议简洁明了地说明工作或实习的具体地点和性质，避免重复和不连贯。

예시: I am currently doing a summer internship at an educational company called Katri Aheen, where I assist with marketing tasks.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整，建议使用连贯的句子，明确表达观点，并用连接词使内容更流畅。

예시: Yes, it is a good place to work because many students from different universities and majors come here. For example, I have made friends with people studying marketing, which helped me understand different aspects of the work environment.

제안: 回答较好，但有拼写错误和语法问题。建议注意单词拼写和主谓一致，同时保持回答简洁自然。

예시: Yes, I like the place where I work because the environment is very comfortable and supportive. For example, they provide free lunch and snacks, which help me feel relaxed and less stressed during the day.

제안: 回答不清晰且有语法错误。建议直接表达未来职业目标，使用正确的词汇和句子结构，具体说明想要的工作类型和原因。

예시: In the future, I plan to work in an international company where I can experience different cultures and travel to various countries around the world.

× I encourage their students majoring in international trade and economics.

✓ I am a student majoring in international trade and economics.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'encourage their students' which does not make sense in context. The student is likely trying to say they are a student themselves. The correction changes the sentence to the correct singular form and meaning.

× how countries exchange goods and service

✓ how countries exchange goods and services

The word 'service' should be plural 'services' because it refers to multiple types of services exchanged between countries.

× Katri Aheen, a university student, brought in my summer location.

✓ I did my summer internship at Katri Aheen, a university student.

The original sentence is unclear and incorrectly structured. The correction clarifies that the student did an internship at a place related to Katri Aheen.

× I went to the internship.

✓ I did an internship.

The phrase 'went to the internship' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'did an internship' or 'completed an internship'.

× I I asked the internship to her educational company to the market internship.

✓ I applied for an internship at her educational company in the marketing department.

The original sentence is confusing and grammatically incorrect. The correction clarifies the intended meaning with proper sentence structure.

× there are many students from different universities and majors.

✓ there are many students from different universities and majors.

This sentence is correct in singular/plural usage and needs no correction.

× I have made friends with people studying marketing and other subjects which helped me see different pages on the work.

✓ I have made friends with people studying marketing and other subjects, which helped me see different aspects of the work.

The phrase 'different pages on the work' is incorrect. The correct preposition and noun phrase is 'different aspects of the work'.

× In my opinion is environment.

✓ In my opinion, it is a good environment.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a subject and verb. The correction completes the sentence properly.

× Actually, I realized the environment of our workplace because it's very comfortable and Sup supportive.

✓ Actually, I like the environment of our workplace because it's very comfortable and supportive.

The word 'realized' is incorrect here; 'like' fits the context better. Also, 'Sup' is likely a typo and should be 'supportive'.

× These kinds of environments makes it easier for me to focus and enjoy my work.

✓ These kinds of environments make it easier for me to focus and enjoy my work.

The subject 'environments' is plural, so the verb should be 'make' instead of 'makes'.

× When I mention my future work plans, I tend to be a atomic atmosphere in the international company.

✓ When I mention my future work plans, I want to work in an international company with a dynamic atmosphere.

The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect word usage. The correction clarifies the intended meaning with proper vocabulary and structure.

× I want to see the world from different country and now some different cultures of the world.

✓ I want to see the world from different countries and know some different cultures of the world.

The word 'country' should be plural 'countries' to match 'different'. Also, 'now' is a typo and should be 'know'.