Work— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答较为完整且自然，但句子较长且信息量较大，建议分成两句表达，避免句子过长，提升表达清晰度。

예시: I am currently working as a lecturer at a university. I teach courses, conduct research, and participate in social service, which I really enjoy because it allows me to share knowledge with students.

제안: 回答内容丰富，但部分信息（如Zhangsha地区介绍）与问题关联不大，建议聚焦于工作地点的具体描述，避免偏题。

예시: I work at a university in Jiangxia District, Wuhan. The campus is surrounded by beautiful green spaces and has a very friendly atmosphere, which makes it a pleasant place to work.

제안: 回答不完整，句子结构不完整且缺乏连贯性，建议使用完整句子并用连接词丰富内容。

예시: Yes, it is a great place to work because the atmosphere at the university is very friendly and the scenery is beautiful.

제안: 回答重复且句子不完整，建议合并句子并增加细节，使表达更自然流畅。

예시: Yes, I like my workplace because it has a friendly vibe and beautiful scenery, which makes me feel comfortable and motivated.

제안: 回答信息较多但句子较长且逻辑连接不够清晰，建议分句表达并使用连接词，使内容更连贯。

예시: In the near future, I plan to focus on teaching, research, and social service. Since my major is management, I hope to open a management accounting company in the long term.

× I'm currently working as a lecturer at a university where I teach courses, do research and social service.

✓ I'm currently working as a lecturer at a university where I teach courses, do research, and provide social services.

“do research and social service”中“social service”作为名词短语，前面缺少动词，应该用“provide social services”来表达“提供社会服务”，使句子结构完整且语义清晰。

× I work at a university located in Jiangxia District in Wuhan. Zhangsha is one of the largest regions in the city and is well known for its beautiful lakes.

✓ I work at a university located in Jiangxia District in Wuhan. Jiangxia is one of the largest regions in the city and is well known for its beautiful lakes.

原句中提到“Zhangsha”，但上下文应为“Jiangxia District”，这里地名错误，需改为“Jiangxia”以保持信息一致。

× Yes, it is really a good place to work. Because the atmosphere at the university is very friendly and the scenery.

✓ Yes, it is really a good place to work because the atmosphere at the university is very friendly and the scenery is beautiful.

“Because”引导的从句不能单独成句，应与前句合并。同时“the scenery”后缺少谓语，需补充“is beautiful”使句子完整。

× Yes, I like my working place. Because there is a friendly vibe and the scenery is beautiful.

✓ Yes, I like my workplace because there is a friendly vibe and the scenery is beautiful.

“working place”应改为“workplace”，表示“工作场所”，且“Because”引导的从句不能单独成句，应与前句合并。

× In the near future, I plan to dedicate myself to teaching, researching, and participating in social service because my major is management, so I want to open a management accounting company in the long term.

✓ In the near future, I plan to dedicate myself to teaching, researching, and participating in social services because my major is management, so I want to open a management accounting company in the long term.

“social service”应为复数形式“social services”，表示多种社会服务活动，符合语境。