Work— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“I'm currently a student study”应为“I'm currently a student studying”，“crime school teacher”可能是“cram school teacher”的误用。建议简化句子结构，确保语法正确，表达清晰。

예시: I'm currently a student studying education at Tainan University. Besides that, I work as a chemistry teacher at a cram school twice a week.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，如“I'm work in Thailand and also a crime school”应为“I work in Thailand and also at a cram school”。建议使用完整句子，注意时态和冠词的使用，并且内容要具体明确。

예시: I work in Thailand at a cram school as a chemistry teacher. I teach there twice a week and help students solve many chemistry problems.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不连贯的问题，如“help me a lot to solve a lots of parent problem”应为“helps me a lot with parents' problems”。建议使用连贯的句子，避免重复和不完整表达。

예시: Definitely, it's a good place to work. My boss is very friendly and helps me a lot with parents' concerns. Also, everyone here is very nice and willing to help each other.

제안: 回答表达较为冗长且语法错误较多，如“where I'm work”应为“where I work”。建议简洁表达，注意语法和句子结构，内容具体且有条理。

예시: Yes, I really like my workplace because I have my own classroom where I can organize everything. It provides a good environment for students to study, and I can give them many test papers and help them with the answers.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整，如“a elementary school teacher”应为“an elementary school teacher”，“I have a experience”应为“I have experience”。建议使用完整句子，表达清晰具体。

예시: I would prefer to be an elementary school teacher because I am majoring in education. I believe teachers can support and encourage students a lot and help them get along with each other. For example, I have experience teaching in elementary schools and have learned a lot from it.

× Work as chemistry teacher in every twice a week.

✓ I work as a chemistry teacher twice a week.

这里缺少主语，且“every twice a week”表达不正确，应改为“twice a week”。“chemistry teacher”前需要冠词“a”。

× I'm work in Thailand and also a crime school.

✓ I work in Thailand and also at a crime school.

动词“work”后应使用介词“in”表示国家或城市，表示具体地点时应使用“at”。“a crime school”前需要冠词。

× I am a chemistry teacher so I need to work twice a week and also need to have a lots of time.

✓ I am a chemistry teacher so I need to work twice a week and also need to have a lot of time.

“a lots of”是错误表达，正确为“a lot of”，表示大量。

× Help students serve a lot of chemistry problem.

✓ I help students solve a lot of chemistry problems.

句子缺少主语和谓语，且“serve”用错，应为“solve”。“problem”应为复数“problems”。

× I'm work in Thailand and also a crime school.

✓ I work in Thailand and also at a crime school.

“I'm work”是错误的主谓结构，应为“I work”。

× Help me a lot to solve a lots of parent problem.

✓ Help me a lot to solve a lot of parent problems.

“a lots of”错误，应为“a lot of”；“problem”应为复数“problems”。

× And also every people in here are very nice and like to help each other a lot if you don't have if you have a workout.

✓ Also, everyone here is very nice and likes to help each other a lot if you have a workout.

“every people”错误，应为“everyone”；主谓一致错误，“people”复数用“are”，但“everyone”单数用“is”；“like”应为“likes”。

× Yes, I really like the place where I'm work because in here I have my own classroom to set up my everything and also can let students have a good environment for studying and also for example I can give them a lot of test paper and even answer them.

✓ Yes, I really like the place where I work because here I have my own classroom to set up everything, and I can also provide students with a good environment for studying. For example, I can give them a lot of test papers and even help answer them.

“I'm work”错误，应为“I work”；“in here”应为“here”；“my everything”表达不自然，应简化为“everything”；“test paper”应为复数“test papers”；句子结构混乱，需拆分并调整。

× I think I'll prefer to be a elementary school teacher because I'm majoring in education and I think teacher can support and encourage students a lot.

✓ I think I'll prefer to be an elementary school teacher because I'm majoring in education and I think teachers can support and encourage students a lot.

“a elementary”前应使用“an”因为“elementary”以元音音素开头；“teacher”应为复数“teachers”表示泛指。

× Also can help them to get along with each other.

✓ They can also help them get along with each other.

句子缺少主语，应补充；“also”位置调整更自然。

× For example, I have a experience in the elementary schools for teaching and I saw a lot.

✓ For example, I have experience teaching in elementary schools and I have seen a lot.

“a experience”错误，experience不可数名词不加冠词；“for teaching”表达不自然，改为“teaching”；“saw”应为现在完成时“have seen”以符合上下文。