Work— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够自然且有语法错误，表达不清晰。建议使用简单明了的句子，直接回答问题，并补充相关细节。

예시: I am currently working. I graduated from school over 10 years ago and have been working at a motorcycle manufacturing company since then.

제안: 回答较简短，缺少连贯性和细节。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并提供更多关于工作的具体信息。

예시: I work in Suzhou, which is a beautiful city near Shanghai. It offers a pleasant environment to work in.

제안: 回答内容较好，但表达不够自然，句子结构有误。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并适当使用连接词。

예시: Yes, it's a good place to work because the company is only 5 kilometers from my house, so I can walk there quickly and have more time to spend with my family.

제안: 回答前后矛盾，表达混乱。建议理清思路，明确表达对工作地点的看法，并避免自相矛盾。

예시: Yes, I like the place where I work because the city is affordable, has convenient traffic, and is close to Shanghai.

제안: 回答表达基本清楚，但语法和用词有误。建议注意语法正确性，使用更自然的表达方式。

예시: I hope to retire at 40 because I want to spend more time with my family and travel around the world.

× I'm mocked.

✓ I'm mocked.

此句中"I'm mocked"语法结构正确，但语义不清，可能是表达错误，不属于语法错误范围。

× I graduated from school over 10 years and I worked at a company from manufacturing motorcycle.

✓ I graduated from school over 10 years ago and I worked at a company manufacturing motorcycles.

"over 10 years"后应加时间状语"ago"表示过去时间；"from manufacturing motorcycle"结构不正确，应改为"manufacturing motorcycles"，表示公司生产摩托车。

× I worked at a company from manufacturing motorcycle.

✓ I worked at a company manufacturing motorcycles.

介词"from"用法错误，描述公司性质时直接用动词现在分词修饰名词即可。

× In Suzhou province, nearby Shanghai, Suzhou is a very beautiful city.

✓ In Suzhou province, near Shanghai, Suzhou is a very beautiful city.

"nearby"是副词，不能直接修饰名词，应使用介词短语"near Shanghai"。

× the company is 5 kilometers near my house.

✓ The company is 5 kilometers from my house.

表示距离时应使用介词"from"，而非"near"。

× It took less time to walk.

✓ It takes less time to walk.

此句描述习惯事实，应使用一般现在时，且"take"后不加介词。

× I want spend more time in on my family or traveling over the world.

✓ I want to spend more time with my family or traveling around the world.

"want"后应接不定式"to spend"；"in on my family"介词错误，应为"with my family"；"traveling over the world"表达不自然，应为"traveling around the world"。

× It took less time to walk.

✓ It takes less time to walk.

描述习惯性事实时应使用一般现在时。

× the city, what I lived is not very expensive, but the traffic is convenient and the location is near Shanghai. It's very inconvenient.

✓ The city where I live is not very expensive, the traffic is convenient and the location is near Shanghai. It's very convenient.

"what I lived"错误，应为"where I live"；"It's very inconvenient"与前文矛盾，应为"It's very convenient"。