Work— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you work or are you a student?
수험생
I was international students in Canada a couple years ago. Right now, uh, currently I am working. I'm a freelance.
시험관
Where do you work?>
수험생
Oh, you're like, I work at home, which means I have a flexible time, but sometimes when I work with the, uh, foreigner and I have to get up very early or stay up very late because we have the time gap.
시험관
Is it a good place to work?
수험생
Yes, I have a great patient on my work. All of my colleague they uh, same age of me, so they're very easy going.
시험관
Would you like the place where you work?
수험생
I like my place where I work because it's based in my hometown, but I'm not your local to office because we usually work at home.
시험관
What are your future work plans?
수험생
I think I need to improve my skill from my colleague who has a variety experience.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you work or are you a student?
점수: 60.0제안: 回答时应注意语法正确性，例如单复数和时态的使用。此外，回答应更简洁自然，避免重复表达。
예시: I was an international student in Canada a couple of years ago. Currently, I am working as a freelancer.
Where do you work?
점수: 65.0제안: 回答应更流畅自然，避免口头语和犹豫词汇。可以使用连接词使句子更连贯。
예시: I work from home, so I have flexible hours. However, sometimes I have to get up very early or stay up late because I work with foreigners in different time zones.
Is it a good place to work?
점수: 55.0제안: 回答中应注意词汇的准确使用，如“patient”应为“patience”或其他合适词汇。句子结构需更完整，避免语法错误。
예시: Yes, I have great patience at work. All of my colleagues are about the same age as me, so they are very easygoing.
Would you like the place where you work?
점수: 60.0제안: 回答应更清晰，避免混淆表达。注意语法和词汇的准确性。
예시: I like my workplace because it is based in my hometown. However, I usually work from home rather than going to the local office.
What are your future work plans?
점수: 60.0제안: 回答应更完整，表达更自然。注意词汇搭配，如“improve my skills by learning from colleagues with diverse experience”。
예시: I plan to improve my skills by learning from my colleagues who have a variety of experiences.
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