Work— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you work or are you a student?
수험생
I was international students in Canada a couple years ago. Right now, uh, currently I am working. I'm a freelance.
시험관
Where do you work?>
수험생
Oh, you're like, I work at home, which means I have a flexible time, but sometimes when I work with the, uh, foreigner and I have to get up very early or stay up very late because we have the time gap.
시험관
Is it a good place to work?
수험생
Yes, I have a great patient on my work. All of my colleague they uh, same age of me, so they're very easy going.
시험관
Would you like the place where you work?
수험생
I like my place where I work because it's based in my hometown, but I'm not your local to office because we usually work at home.
시험관
What are your future work plans?
수험생
I think I need to improve my skill from my colleague who has a variety experience.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you work or are you a student?
점수: 65.0제안: 回答时应注意语法正确性，例如“students”应为单数“student”，并且表达应更自然流畅。可以简洁明了地回答当前身份，并补充相关细节。
예시: I was an international student in Canada a couple of years ago. Currently, I am working as a freelancer.
Where do you work?
점수: 70.0제안: 回答应更简洁自然，避免口头语和重复。可以使用连接词使句子更连贯，并具体说明工作时间的灵活性和时差带来的影响。
예시: I work from home, so I have flexible hours. However, sometimes I need to get up early or stay up late to communicate with foreign clients because of the time difference.
Is it a good place to work?
점수: 60.0제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，应注意主谓一致和词汇使用。可以更具体描述工作环境和同事关系。
예시: Yes, I have great patience at work. All of my colleagues are around my age, so they are very easy-going.
Would you like the place where you work?
점수: 65.0제안: 回答应更自然流畅，避免语法错误和不连贯。可以清楚表达喜欢工作的地点及工作方式。
예시: I like my workplace because it's based in my hometown, but I usually work from home rather than going to the local office.
What are your future work plans?
점수: 60.0제안: 回答应注意语法和表达准确性。可以更具体说明未来计划和学习目标。
예시: I plan to improve my skills by learning from my colleagues who have a variety of experiences.
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