Work— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it could be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating information and try to use a linking phrase to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: I'm a student about to start my bachelor's degree, so I'm currently preparing for the IELTS speaking test to improve my English skills.

제안: Your answer is understandable but a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to be more concise and use linking words to organize your ideas better. Also, avoid repeating similar words like 'TV series' and 'TV serials'.

예시: I don't work at the moment; I stay at home and spend my free time playing video games, doing hand crafts, and watching TV series.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct verb forms and clearer sentence structures. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

예시: I think studying from home is better than attending classes outside because it gives me more flexibility. For example, I can manage my to-do lists more effectively and identify areas where I need improvement.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and contains grammatical errors. Make sure to finish your sentences and use correct verb forms. Also, try to expand your answer with reasons or examples to make it more informative.

예시: Yes, I like working and studying from home because it allows me to create a comfortable environment and manage my time efficiently.

제안: Your answer is relevant but has some grammatical mistakes and unclear expressions. Use articles correctly and avoid vague phrases like 'processing it.' Also, try to explain your plans more clearly and confidently.

예시: In the future, I plan to work as an international art communicator, which is a unique field. Currently, I am learning and gaining experience to prepare myself for this career.

× Currently I don't work, I stay at home right now and in my leisure time I just play some video games, do some hand crafts and watch some TV series, TV serials.

✓ Currently I don't work, I stay at home right now and in my leisure time I just play some video games, do some handcrafts and watch some TV series.

The phrase 'hand crafts' should be combined into one word 'handcrafts' as it is a compound noun referring to handmade items. Also, 'TV serials' is redundant after 'TV series', so it is better to remove 'TV serials' for clarity and correctness.

× I study from home and I do think that study from home is a better way that having classes outside because it give me more flexibility and I can manage all my to do lists and to get to know better what I am lack of.

✓ I study from home and I do think that studying from home is a better way than having classes outside because it gives me more flexibility and I can manage all my to-do lists and get to know better what I lack.

The verb 'study' should be in the gerund form 'studying' after 'think that'. The phrase 'that having classes outside' should be 'than having classes outside' to correctly compare two things. 'Give' should be 'gives' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'To get to know better what I am lack of' is incorrect; it should be 'get to know better what I lack' because 'lack' is a verb and does not need a preposition here.

× I study from home and I do think that study from home is a better way that having classes outside because it give me more flexibility and I can manage all my to do lists and to get to know better what I am lack of.

✓ I study from home and I do think that studying from home is a better way than having classes outside because it gives me more flexibility and I can manage all my to-do lists and get to know better what I lack.

The verb 'give' must be in third person singular form 'gives' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× Yes, I like it very much. You can say that I am currently work and study from home and.

✓ Yes, I like it very much. You can say that I am currently working and studying from home.

The phrase 'I am currently work and study' is incorrect because after 'am' the verb should be in the present participle (-ing) form. Also, the sentence ends abruptly with 'and' which is incomplete. The corrected sentence uses 'working and studying' and removes the incomplete conjunction.

× In the future I plan to work as a international art communicator, which is very abstract, but I will do my best to be it and As for now, I'm still learning and processing it.

✓ In the future I plan to work as an international art communicator, which is very abstract, but I will do my best to be it and as for now, I'm still learning and processing it.

The article 'a' should be 'an' before a word starting with a vowel sound like 'international'. Also, 'As' should be lowercase 'as' in the middle of the sentence. The phrase 'do my best to be it' is awkward but kept as is since it is part of the original meaning.