Work— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答已經很清楚，但可以更自然且精簡。建議直接說明目前狀態，避免重複或冗長的描述。

예시: I recently graduated from graduate school and am currently preparing to apply for a PhD program, so I am not working or studying at the moment.

제안: 回答內容完整，但可以使用連接詞讓句子更流暢，並且用更自然的表達方式。

예시: I'm not working currently, but I used to be a teaching assistant for two professors in my department, where I helped with paperwork and grading assignments.

제안: 回答中有語法錯誤，且句子結構不夠自然。建議使用連接詞並修正語法，使表達更流暢。

예시: Yes, it was a good place to work because I could do most tasks from home and only needed to meet the professors once a week.

제안: 回答自然且有條理，但可以用更簡潔的方式表達，避免重複。

예시: Yes, I like working from home because it offers flexibility and saves me commuting time, allowing me to manage my schedule better.

제안: 回答清楚，但可以更具體說明未來計畫，並使用連接詞使句子更完整。

예시: Although I'm not working now, I plan to apply for a professor position after completing my PhD program.

× I help them to deal with some documents and mark the papers.

✓ I help them deal with some documents and mark the papers.

In English, after the verb 'help', the base form of the verb is used without 'to'. Using 'to deal' is incorrect here. The correct form is 'help them deal'. (在英文中，動詞 'help' 後面接動詞時，應使用原形動詞而非帶 'to' 的不定詞。)

× I can stay home to do all the tasks on computer and only needs to meet professors every once every week.

✓ I can stay home to do all the tasks on the computer and only need to meet professors once every week.

The phrase 'on computer' should be 'on the computer' because 'computer' is a countable noun and requires an article here. Also, 'only needs' should be 'only need' to agree with the subject 'I'. The phrase 'every once every week' is redundant; the correct expression is 'once every week'. (此處 'computer' 為可數名詞，需加定冠詞 'the'。動詞 'needs' 應與主詞 'I' 一致改為 'need'。'every once every week' 表達重複，正確用法為 'once every week'。)

× I can stay home to do all the tasks on computer and only needs to meet professors every once every week.

✓ I can stay home to do all the tasks on the computer and only need to meet professors once every week.

The verb 'needs' is incorrectly used with the subject 'I'. For first person singular, the verb should be 'need' without 's'. (動詞 'needs' 不應用於第一人稱單數主詞 'I'，應改為 'need'。)

× I can stay home to do all the tasks on computer and only needs to meet professors every once every week.

✓ I can stay home to do all the tasks on the computer and only need to meet professors once every week.

The preposition 'on' is correctly used with 'the computer', but 'on computer' is incorrect. Also, 'every once every week' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'once every week'. ('on computer' 用法錯誤，應為 'on the computer'。'every once every week' 表達不正確，應為 'once every week'。)