Work— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains repetition. Try to respond directly and clearly with correct grammar. For example, start with a clear topic sentence and then add a detail about your job and workplace.

예시: I am a staff nurse and have been working at Navajo Hospital in Surah for one year.

제안: Your answer is confusing and has grammatical errors. Please give a clear and concise response with correct sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

예시: I work as a staff nurse at Raja Hospital in Rajah. It is a very big hospital, and I feel happy to help patients there.

제안: Your answer is too short and lacks detail. Try to expand your answer by giving reasons or examples to support your opinion.

예시: Yes, it is a good place to work because the staff are friendly and the environment is supportive.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains repetition. Please answer directly and provide specific reasons using linking words to make your response coherent.

예시: I like the place where I work because it is a big hospital with a calm and peaceful environment, which helps me focus on my job.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and does not address the question. Please provide a clear response about your future work plans with some details.

예시: In the future, I plan to gain more experience and possibly specialize in pediatric nursing to improve my skills.

× Do you work or are you a student? I have a work I am a staff nurse in. Navajo Hospital, Surah one years.

✓ I am a staff nurse at Navajo Hospital, Surah, and I have worked there for one year.

The original sentence has sentence structure errors and incorrect article usage. 'I have a work' is incorrect; 'work' is uncountable here, so 'a work' is wrong. Also, the sentence is fragmented and unclear. The correction combines the ideas into a clear, grammatically correct sentence using the present perfect tense to indicate duration.

× I have a staff nurse and I have worked at a hospital in Rajah in the name of the hospital is Raja Hospital.

✓ I am a staff nurse and I have worked at a hospital in Rajah called Raja Hospital.

The phrase 'I have a staff nurse' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'I am a staff nurse'. Also, 'in the name of the hospital is Raja Hospital' is awkward and incorrect. The preposition 'called' is used to indicate the name of the hospital. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.

× It is very big hospital and I have I I feel very happy to help up over and an ad.

✓ It is a very big hospital and I feel very happy to help others.

The article 'a' is missing before 'very big hospital'. The phrase 'help up over and an ad' is unclear and likely incorrect; it is corrected to 'help others' to convey the intended meaning. The sentence is simplified and corrected for clarity and grammar.

× It is a good place.

✓ It is a good place.

This sentence is correct and requires no changes.

× I like the place, I live in a countryside area and and I'm a staff nurse. Was the hospital the name of water hospital? It is very big hospital and I live. I like this place because place environment, it is very good calm goal.

✓ I like this place. I live in a countryside area and I am a staff nurse at the hospital. The hospital is called Water Hospital. It is a very big hospital. I like this place because the environment is very good, calm, and cool.

The original sentences have multiple sentence structure errors, incorrect articles, and unclear phrases. 'Was the hospital the name of water hospital?' is incorrect and changed to 'The hospital is called Water Hospital.' Articles 'a' and 'the' are added appropriately. The phrase 'place environment, it is very good calm goal' is corrected to 'the environment is very good, calm, and cool' for clarity and correctness.