Work— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 文法の誤りを修正し、より自然で簡潔な表現を使うことをおすすめします。例えば、冠詞の使い方や動詞の時制に注意し、冗長な部分を避けると良いでしょう。

예시: I currently work at a development company where I lead a team that transforms traditional Japanese houses into hotels and restaurants. I really enjoy my job.

제안: 発音や文のつながりに注意し、意味が通じるように明確に話す練習をしましょう。また、地名の正確な発音や文法の誤りを直すことが必要です。

예시: I work in Consumer Prefecture, located in the southern part of Japan. I like it here because I can enjoy art, and even in winter, the weather is warm.

제안: 代名詞の使い方に注意し、文法的に正しい文章を作る練習をしましょう。また、"wake time"は不自然なので、適切な表現に置き換えることをおすすめします。

예시: Yes, definitely. The people are calm, and there is plenty of nature, so I can feel relaxed during my free time.

제안: 文の繰り返しを避け、接続詞を使って文をつなげる練習をしましょう。より自然で流暢な表現を目指してください。

예시: Yes, my workplace is my favorite place to concentrate, where I can meet my favorite colleagues and stay motivated.

제안: 前置詞や冠詞の使い方に注意し、文をより自然にするために語順や表現を工夫しましょう。具体的な計画をもう少し詳しく述べると良いです。

예시: I would like to continue working in this job, and in the future, I hope to work in another country on projects related to renovation.

× I am currently working at development company and I'm in charge of a development team which innovates Japanese traditional houses into hotels and restaurants.

✓ I am currently working at a development company and I'm in charge of a development team which innovates Japanese traditional houses into hotels and restaurants.

The sentence is missing the indefinite article 'a' before 'development company'. In English, singular countable nouns usually require an article. Here, 'development company' is singular and countable, so 'a' is necessary.

× I am working in Consumer Prefecture which is in southern part of Japan.

✓ I am working in Consumer Prefecture which is in the southern part of Japan.

The phrase 'in southern part of Japan' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'southern part'. When referring to a specific part of a place, 'the' is required.

× I like here because I can. Call art.

✓ I like it here because I can enjoy art.

The sentence has a pronoun error and an incomplete phrase. 'I like here' should be 'I like it here' because 'here' needs an object pronoun 'it' to be correct. Also, 'I can. Call art.' is unclear and likely a transcription error; it is corrected to 'I can enjoy art' to make sense.

× People are calm and he has plenty of nature so I can feel relaxed when I have wake time.

✓ People are calm and there is plenty of nature so I can feel relaxed when I have free time.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'he' instead of 'there' and 'wake time' which is not a correct phrase. 'There is' is the correct existential phrase to indicate existence. 'Wake time' should be 'free time' to express leisure time.