Work— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and repetitive. Try to make your response more concise and structured by stating your current status first, then your future plans, avoiding repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Currently, I am preparing for the IELTS examination while completing my diploma in engineering. I also plan to work part-time in my field to improve my skills.

제안: Your answer is confusing and contains grammatical errors. Respond directly and clearly, using correct grammar and linking words to explain your intentions and reasons.

예시: I am not working yet, but I hope to work in Nepal in the government sector because the country's economy is growing, which offers good opportunities.

제안: Your answer lacks clarity and contains incorrect word usage. Provide a clear opinion with specific reasons, and use appropriate vocabulary and linking words.

예시: Yes, Nepal is a developing country, so engineers have significant benefits there. Moreover, it is relatively easy to find work in this field.

제안: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Answer directly and use linking words to explain your feelings and reasons clearly and coherently.

예시: I haven't started working yet, but I believe I will like the workplace because it will help me learn more about the area and gain valuable experience.

제안: Your answer is repetitive and grammatically incorrect. Provide a clear and concise response with linking words to explain your plans and reasons.

예시: In the future, I want to become an engineer in Nepal because completing my engineering studies will help me improve my skills and advance my career.

× In this time I prepare for the IELTS examination but I also complete my diploma level engineering Diploma in engineering in engineering but I want to work part time is in my major that helps me improve my skills.

✓ At this time, I am preparing for the IELTS examination, and I am also completing my diploma level in engineering. I want to work part-time in my major because it helps me improve my skills.

The original sentence incorrectly uses the simple present tense 'prepare' and 'complete' for ongoing actions. The present continuous tense 'am preparing' and 'am completing' is appropriate for actions happening now. Also, the sentence structure was confusing and repetitive, so it was clarified for better understanding.

× I already say I didn't work yet, but I I want to be work in my in my country Nepal.

✓ I already said I haven't worked yet, but I want to work in my country, Nepal.

The phrase 'I already say' should be in the past tense 'I already said' to match the time frame. 'Didn't work yet' is incorrect; the present perfect 'haven't worked yet' is appropriate to indicate an action not done up to now. 'Want to be work' is incorrect; it should be 'want to work'.

× It has growth, my growth in economic in my country and also I want to be a government sector.

✓ There is economic growth in my country, and I also want to work in the government sector.

The phrase 'It has growth, my growth in economic' is awkward and incorrect. 'There is economic growth' is the correct expression. Also, 'want to be a government sector' is incorrect; one works in a sector, so 'work in the government sector' is correct.

× Yes, Nepal is a diplomatal country, so in this country engineering have a significant benefits and it is it have also easy for work according to.

✓ Yes, Nepal is a developing country, so engineering has significant benefits here, and it is also easy to find work.

The word 'diplomatal' is incorrect; likely intended 'developing'. 'Engineering have' should be 'engineering has' to agree in number. 'Significant benefits' should not have 'a' before it. 'It is it have also easy for work according to' is ungrammatical and was corrected to 'it is also easy to find work' for clarity.

× I already say I I haven't walk yet, but when I walked, I of course I like their place because it helps to me know know about that place and.

✓ I already said I haven't worked yet, but when I work, of course I will like the place because it helps me learn about it.

'I already say' should be 'I already said' for past tense. 'I haven't walk yet' is incorrect; it should be 'I haven't worked yet' using the past participle. 'When I walked' should be 'when I work' to match the intended future action. 'Helps to me know know' is incorrect; 'helps me learn' is correct.

× In in the future I want I will be a engineer in Nepal because I complete my engineer study in engineering sector so it helps to improve my skills and growth my work.

✓ In the future, I want to be an engineer in Nepal because I will complete my engineering studies, which will help improve my skills and advance my career.

The sentence mixes tenses and has awkward phrasing. 'I want I will be' should be 'I want to be'. 'A engineer' should be 'an engineer' due to vowel sound. 'I complete my engineer study' should be 'I will complete my engineering studies' for future action. 'Growth my work' is incorrect; 'advance my career' is clearer and grammatically correct.