Work— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够连贯，语法错误较多，表达不自然。建议简洁明了地回答问题，使用完整句子，并避免重复和断断续续的表达。

예시: I am currently a senior student. This year, I need to decide whether to start working or continue my studies abroad.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，且句子不完整。建议使用完整句子，明确表达观点，并适当使用连接词使回答更流畅。

예시: If I have to work, I would choose to stay in Changsha or Hangzhou because Changsha is my hometown, and I believe I have better chances of finding a good job there. Also, Hangzhou is a great city with many opportunities.

제안: 回答较为简单，句子结构不完整，表达不够流畅。建议使用完整句子，增加具体细节，并使用连接词使回答更连贯。

예시: Yes, it is a good place to work because it is the capital city of the province. Therefore, there are many resources and companies available, which provide various job opportunities for me.

제안: 表达重复且不连贯，语法错误较多。建议用简洁的句子表达观点，避免重复，并具体说明原因。

예시: I would like to work in my favorite place because it makes me feel free and happy.

제안: 回答不完整且语法错误严重，表达不清晰。建议用完整句子清楚地说明未来计划，避免断断续续的表达。

예시: I plan to go abroad to develop my skills and then work in Hangzhou or Changsha as a marketing manager.

× Do you work or you a student?

✓ Do you work or are you a student?

句子缺少谓语动词，导致结构不完整。应在第二个分句中加上动词“are”，使句子结构完整。

× I still a student, but I become a senior student in this year.

✓ I am still a student, but I am becoming a senior student this year.

缺少动词“am”，且“become”应使用现在进行时表示正在发生的变化。

× This, which means I need to, work or. Go abroad to. Study continuously.

✓ This means I need to work or go abroad to study continuously.

句子断裂，标点使用不当，导致句子不连贯，应合并为完整句子。

× If I need to work, I think I would choose to stay in Changhai or Hangzhou because Changhong is my hometown.

✓ If I need to work, I think I would choose to stay in Changhai or Hangzhou because Changhai is my hometown.

地名拼写错误，且句子结构基本正确。

× And in a Hangzhou, I think this is one of my best places to.

✓ And in Hangzhou, I think this is one of the best places for me.

“a Hangzhou”中“a”不应使用，地名前不加冠词；句尾不完整，应补充完整表达。

× Therefore, there is a variety of resources and. Companies to for me to choose.

✓ Therefore, there is a variety of resources and companies for me to choose from.

句子断裂，介词使用错误，应使用“choose from”表示“从中选择”。

× Actually, I think the place I would like to work is my favorite places.

✓ Actually, I think the place I would like to work is my favorite place.

“place”是单数，不能用复数“places”，应保持单复数一致。

× It's favorite place.

✓ It's my favorite place.

缺少物主代词“my”，使表达完整。

× Because I think this place will let me feel free of freedom and. Happy and happy.

✓ Because I think this place will let me feel free and happy.

表达重复且不连贯，应简化为“free and happy”。

× Well, I plan to go abroad to develop myself and working. Hangzhou or Chen-shan? To become a marketing. Managers.

✓ Well, I plan to go abroad to develop myself and work in Hangzhou or Chen-shan to become a marketing manager.

“working”应改为动词原形“work”，且句子断裂，应合并为完整句子；“Managers”应为单数“manager”。