Work— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more grammatically accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one brief supporting detail. Avoid redundant phrases and fix verb forms (e.g., “I’m currently employed as…”).

예시: I work as a senior quality assurance engineer in a software company. I have 15 years of experience in this field, mainly testing large-scale web applications.

제안: Simplify and correct sentence structure, use linking words for coherence, and reduce repetition. Combine related facts into two concise sentences.

예시: I work for Verizon, a U.S.-based telecom company that provides cellular and 5G services. I’m based in Chennai and follow a hybrid schedule: three days in the office and two days working from home.

제안: Use natural phrasing and link ideas smoothly. Replace awkward expressions (e.g., “to get employed”) and add a short reason for your opinion using a linking phrase.

예시: Yes, it’s a great place to work because it offers an excellent work–life balance. For example, flexible hours and employee benefits helped the company be named one of the best places to work in India.

제안: Be specific about the reasons and avoid filler words (e.g., “uh”) and vague phrases (e.g., “various reasons”). Keep to maximum five concise sentences and correct verb agreement (e.g., “provides” not “provided”).

예시: Yes, I do. I enjoy going to the office because it has world‑class infrastructure and provides up‑to‑date devices and equipment, which help me work more efficiently and boost team performance.

제안: Give a direct topic sentence about your plan, then add a specific, realistic step and timeframe. Avoid vague ambition phrasing and use correct expressions (e.g., “reach the top of corporate leadership” or “become a CEO someday”).

예시: My long‑term goal is to become a CEO of a technology company. To achieve that, I plan to gain more leadership experience by managing larger teams over the next five years and taking executive management training courses.

× I currently employed as a senior quality assurance engineer in a software company.

✓ I am currently employed as a senior quality assurance engineer in a software company.

The sentence is missing the auxiliary verb 'am' for the present passive construction. Use 'am employed' to form the present passive tense for the first person singular subject 'I'. Suggestion: include the correct form of 'to be' (am/is/are) before the past participle 'employed'.

× I have a total experience of 15 years in this domain.

✓ I have a total of 15 years of experience in this domain.

The word order and preposition use are incorrect. Native usage is 'have ... of experience' or 'have ... years of experience'. Move 'of' to follow the quantity and place 'experience' after it. Suggestion: say 'I have 15 years of experience' or 'I have a total of 15 years of experience'. Also keep present perfect to indicate accumulated experience.

× I work at Verizon at telecom based U.S. company providing cellular and 5G Internet services to the US customers.

✓ I work at Verizon, a telecom-based U.S. company providing cellular and 5G Internet services to US customers.

Two issues: use of preposition 'at' before the company description is wrong and article/hyphenation. Replace the second 'at' with a comma and use the adjective form 'telecom-based'. Also omit 'the' before 'US customers' in general statements. Suggestion: use apposition with a comma and correct hyphenation.

× My current work location is in Chennai.

✓ My current work location is Chennai.

Both forms are acceptable, but 'is Chennai' is more natural and concise when naming a location. Removing 'in' after 'location' improves fluency. Suggestion: say 'My current work location is Chennai.' or 'I am currently based in Chennai.'

× It's a hybrid work model where I will connect from office for three days and work remotely from home for the rest of the two days.

✓ It's a hybrid work model where I come to the office for three days and work remotely from home for the other two days.

Using 'will' is unnecessary for habitual schedule; simple present is preferred for routines. Also use 'come to the office' or 'go to the office', and 'other two days' instead of 'rest of the two days'. Suggestion: use simple present for regular schedules.

× There is a perfect work life balance which helps me to stay connected with my loved ones.

✓ There is a perfect work-life balance, which helps me stay connected with my loved ones.

Hyphenate 'work-life' as a compound adjective before 'balance'. Also the infinitive 'to stay' can be shortened to 'stay' after 'helps'. Add a comma before the nonrestrictive clause 'which helps...'. Suggestion: use 'work-life balance' and 'helps me stay...'.

× Recently, the company was recognized as one of the best places to work in India.

✓ Recently, the company was recognized as one of the best places to work in India.

This sentence is grammatically correct. No change is needed. Explanation: 'was recognized' is an appropriate past passive form to describe a recent award. No suggestion required.

× Would you like the place where you work?

✓ Do you like the place where you work?

The examiner's question 'Would you like the place where you work?' is unnatural; 'Do you like...' is the correct way to ask about present preference. 'Would you like' implies offering or future preference. Suggestion: use 'Do you like...' for current opinions.

× I love travelling to my office because of various reasons.

✓ I love travelling to my office for various reasons.

Use 'for various reasons' rather than 'because of various reasons'. 'Because of' is followed by a noun phrase explaining a cause; 'for various reasons' is idiomatic for multiple motivations. Suggestion: use 'for various reasons'.

× It has a world class infrastructure and also provided us with the latest devices and equipments which help me to work more efficiently and uh, it improves the overall company performance.

✓ It has world-class infrastructure and also provides us with the latest devices and equipment, which help me work more efficiently and improve the company's overall performance.

Multiple issues: hyphenate 'world-class'; use singular mass noun 'equipment' (not 'equipments'); verb tense/agreement: use 'provides' (present) to match 'It has'; relative clause should be 'which help me' (plural 'help' because 'devices and equipment' are plural conceptually) and then 'improve' to match plural subject; avoid filler 'uh'. Suggestion: use correct hyphenation, subject-verb agreement, and proper noun forms.

× I would like to reach the top of the corporate leader and soon become a CEO of a company.

✓ I would like to reach the top of corporate leadership and eventually become the CEO of a company.

'Top of the corporate leader' is incorrect noun phrase; use 'top of corporate leadership' or 'a top corporate position'. Also 'soon become a CEO of a company' is awkward—use 'eventually become the CEO of a company' or 'become a CEO'. Use definite article 'the CEO' if referring to the company's chief executive. Suggestion: rephrase to 'reach the top of corporate leadership' and 'eventually become the CEO'.