Work— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 总体回答直接且信息明确，但可以更自然、更流畅。可以加一两句补充说明你的专业或学校生活，以丰富内容并展示更好的词汇与连贯性。注意避免冗长句子且保持不超过5句。

예시: I'm a second-year university student studying in Nanjing. I major in International Business, and I enjoy campus life here because there are many student clubs and good internship opportunities.

제안: 回答语法错误且表达含糊。应直接回应“我不工作”，并简要说明原因（例如全职学生或兼职意向）。注意使用正确的时态和句子结构，避免口语化模糊短语。

예시: I don't work at the moment because I'm a full-time student. I'm focusing on my studies and preparing for an exchange program.

제안: 重复前面的内容且含有语法错误。应先确认自己不工作，然后给出假设性看法或转述你理想的工作环境，展现推理能力并使用连接词。

예시: I don't work currently, so I haven't experienced a workplace here. However, if I did, I would prefer a place with supportive colleagues and flexible hours because that helps balance study and work.

제안: 同样重复且语法不准确。应回答假设性的偏好，而不是简单否定，提供具体理由并使用连接词来增强连贯性。

예시: Since I don't work now, I can't say for sure, but I would like a workplace that offers training and career development because I want to gain practical experience.

제안: 回答包含有用的信息，但有重复（"short short term"）且不够连贯。应先给出总体计划，然后用连接词补充细节（例如时间、目的或后续步骤），并避免重复词语。

예시: My short-term plan is to achieve my target score in English and then go to Hong Kong as an exchange student. After that, I hope to find an internship in an international company to gain work experience.

× I haven't work, I just didn't.

✓ I haven't worked; I just haven't.

这是过去时与现在完成时使用不当的错误。句子中使用了“haven't” (现在完成时助动词) 后面应接过去分词，所以“work”应改为过去分词“worked”。另外“I just didn't.” 不完整且时态不一致，可改为“I just haven't（worked）”或更自然的“I haven't worked yet.” 建议：当用现在完成时（have/has + 过去分词）表达到目前为止未做过某事时，使用过去分词；若用一般过去时（didn't）则需有明确过去时间点。可改为“I haven't worked yet.”（到目前为止我还没工作过）。

× I'm a student, I haven't go to work.

✓ I'm a student; I haven't gone to work.

这里混用了现在时和现在完成时，并且“go”应为过去分词“gone”以构成现在完成时（have/has + 过去分词）。正确表达应为“I haven't gone to work”或更自然“I haven't started working yet.” 建议：使用现在完成时表达到目前为止尚未发生的动作时，动词要用过去分词形式，例如“have gone/been/started”。

× I'm a student, I haven't go to work.

✓ I'm a student; I haven't gone to work.

（同上句）句子重复出现相同错误。“haven't”后应接过去分词“gone”。为更自然可说“I haven't started working yet.” 建议：注意现在完成时的结构并根据语境选择更地道表达。