Work— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答要更直接并减少犹豫词（如 uh）和冗余句子。开头应简洁说明当前身份，然后用一两句具体信息支持（例如公司类型、职责）。注意动词时态和时间表达的一致性（例如“I graduated in 2020”而不是“have graduated since”）。

예시: I graduated from university in 2020. Since then I have been running my own company for about five years, where I work as a public speaking trainer helping clients improve their presentation skills.

제안: 答案可以更自然和具体。避免重复（如 "this is my own workplace" 与前句信息重复），可以补充地点或办公室特点让回答更丰富，例如办公地点、氛围或你在办公室负责的工作。

예시: I work in a small office with three colleagues. It's a cozy space in the city center where we hold planning meetings and client workshops.

제안: 尽量避免口语填充词（如 "you know"）。回答时先直接给出观点，然后用一两个具体原因支持，如同事关系、工作设施或通勤方便等，保持句子简洁连贯。

예시: Yes, it's a great place to work because my colleagues are supportive, and the office is well-equipped for organizing workshops and training sessions.

제안: 回答要更自信并减少模糊语（如 "I guess", "uh", "you know"）。开头直接肯定喜欢，然后用具体例子说明为何喜欢（例如可以举一两个你做过的项目或成果）。保持句子条理清楚，不超过五句。

예시: Yes, I really like my workplace because it allows me to develop inspiring workshops. For example, I recently designed a confidence-building course that helped several clients improve their presentation skills.

제안: 回答需要更清晰有条理，使用并列结构介绍三个计划，避免时态混乱和重复。每项计划应具体化（例如学习方式、目标或创建什么）。保持句子简短且用连接词如 "first", "second", "finally" 来组织信息。

예시: I have three main plans for the future. First, I want to improve my English speaking skills by taking advanced courses and practicing with native speakers. Second, I plan to further develop my public speaking skills by attending masterclasses and doing more live workshops. Finally, I aim to create more training programs and online courses to reach a wider audience.

× While I have graduated from my university since uh, 2020.

✓ I graduated from university in 2020.

原句中使用了现在完成时态结构“have graduated”并且搭配时间点“since 2020”，表达不自然且时态错误。英语中若有具体过去时间点（如 2020），应使用一般过去时 hence 用“I graduated”。建议：当提及具体过去时间点时，用一般过去时；当强调从过去持续到现在时并使用“since”时，才用现在完成时。

× So for now I am running my own company for about 5 years and uh I'm working as a public speaking trainer.

✓ So for now I have been running my own company for about five years, and I'm working as a public speaking trainer.

原句说“for about 5 years”表示从过去持续到现在，应使用现在完成进行时（have been running），而不是现在进行时（am running）。建议：当动作从过去持续到现在并且持续一段时间时，使用现在完成进行时或现在完成时。

× I work in a small office with three colleagues and this is my own workplace.

✓ I work in a small office with three colleagues; this is my own workplace.

原句语法总体可理解，但两个并列分句之间应使用分号或连词连接以改善句子结构。这里属于句子结构和标点改进，主要调整连贯性。建议：并列句用and也可，但保持标点和连词一致。

× Of course, it's a great place to work as I have three good colleagues to work with and a small office for me to organize my, you know, workshops.

✓ Of course, it's a great place to work because I have three good colleagues to work with and a small office where I can organize my workshops.

原句中“for me to organize my workshops”虽然可理解，但更地道的表达是使用定语从句“where I can organize my workshops”。同时将口语填充词“you know”删除以增强正式性。建议：用定语从句或不定式清晰表达地点和用途。

× Yeah, I guess I really like the place I work because, uh, it is a good place for me to, you know, create something important, something inspiring to help my clients to improve their confidence in public speaking.

✓ Yes, I really like the place I work because it is a good place for me to create things that are important and inspiring, and to help my clients improve their confidence in public speaking.

原句中重复使用不必要的“to”结构（“to help my clients to improve”），在英语中第二个“to”通常省略。并将“something important, something inspiring”改为更自然的“things that are important and inspiring”。建议：避免冗余不定式，保持并列结构一致。

× I guess there are three main plans for me. One of them is that I wanted to I want to improve my English speaking skills and the next will be improve my public speaking skills.

✓ I guess there are three main plans for me. One is that I want to improve my English speaking skills; the next is to improve my public speaking skills.

原句混用了时态（'wanted to' 与 'I want to'），且第二部分缺少不定式结构“to improve”。应统一使用现在时“want”来表示未来计划，并使用不定式表示目的。建议：表达计划时保持时态一致，使用固定结构如 'One is to...'。

× And for the last one I guess is to create more.

✓ And the last one, I guess, is to create more content/products/workshops.

原句'And for the last one I guess is to create more.' 句子结构不完整且不够具体。需要调整语序并补充名词以明确“create more”后面的对象。建议：把“the last one”与谓语正确连接，并明确所要“创造”的内容。