Puzzles— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Did you do puzzles in your childhood?
수험생
In my childhood, I did a lot of puzzles because my mother thought that it was a great way to improve my memory.
시험관
When do you do puzzles, during your trip or when you feel bored?
수험생
I did puzzles, uh, when I feel bored because I think it's the time I can focus my mind on something.
시험관
Do you like doing word puzzles or number puzzles? Which is more difficult for you?
수험생
I like doing number puzzles because I think that number puzzle is more difficult for me than word puzzles, so it's both challenging and rewarding when a success to resolve a number puzzle.
시험관
Do you think it is good for old people to do puzzles?
수험생
I think it's great for old people to do puzzles because it's a way to keep their memory. Besides, I saw a report who highlight the great effect of puzzles in memory.
평가
총점
Part 1
Did you do puzzles in your childhood?
점수: 75.0제안: Votre réponse est claire mais pourrait être plus naturelle et concise. Essayez d'éviter les répétitions et d'utiliser des phrases plus fluides pour exprimer la même idée.
예시: Yes, I did a lot of puzzles as a child because my mother believed they helped improve my memory.
When do you do puzzles, during your trip or when you feel bored?
점수: 70.0제안: Faites attention à la concordance des temps et évitez les hésitations comme "uh". Utilisez des mots de liaison pour rendre votre réponse plus fluide et naturelle.
예시: I usually do puzzles when I feel bored because it's a good way to focus my mind and pass the time.
Do you like doing word puzzles or number puzzles? Which is more difficult for you?
점수: 65.0제안: Votre réponse est un peu longue et contient des erreurs grammaticales. Essayez de structurer votre réponse avec une phrase principale claire et des détails précis, en utilisant des mots de liaison.
예시: I prefer number puzzles because they are more challenging than word puzzles, and solving them gives me a great sense of achievement.
Do you think it is good for old people to do puzzles?
점수: 70.0제안: Améliorez la précision grammaticale et utilisez des expressions plus naturelles. Ajoutez des détails spécifiques pour renforcer votre réponse.
예시: Yes, I believe puzzles are beneficial for elderly people because they help maintain memory and cognitive skills. I read a report that emphasized the positive effects of puzzles on brain health.
문법
× I did puzzles, uh, when I feel bored because I think it's the time I can focus my mind on something.
✓ I do puzzles, uh, when I feel bored because I think it's the time I can focus my mind on something.
The sentence mixes past tense 'did' with present tense 'feel' and 'think'. Since the action is habitual, present tense should be used consistently for all verbs.
× I like doing number puzzles because I think that number puzzle is more difficult for me than word puzzles, so it's both challenging and rewarding when a success to resolve a number puzzle.
✓ I like doing number puzzles because I think that number puzzles are more difficult for me than word puzzles, so it's both challenging and rewarding when I succeed in solving a number puzzle.
The phrase 'number puzzle' should be plural 'number puzzles' to match the comparison with 'word puzzles'. Also, 'a success to resolve' is incorrect; it should be 'I succeed in solving' to express the idea properly.
× Besides, I saw a report who highlight the great effect of puzzles in memory.
✓ Besides, I saw a report that highlights the great effect of puzzles on memory.
The relative pronoun 'who' is used for people, not reports. 'That' is correct here. Also, 'highlight' should be 'highlights' to agree with singular 'report'. The preposition 'in' should be 'on' when referring to effects on memory.
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