Puzzles— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to use correct grammar and avoid repetition. Also, be careful with word choice, for example, 'budget' should be 'puzzle'. Keep your answer clear and concise, and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: When I was a child, I did a lot of puzzles because completing them was very exciting. For instance, I felt over the moon whenever I finished a challenging puzzle.

제안: Use the correct tense and sentence structure. Also, capitalisation should be consistent. Try to add linking words to make your answer more coherent and provide specific details.

예시: I usually complete puzzles when I feel bored, and I prefer doing them with my family and friends. Sometimes, my big brother helps me finish the final pieces, which makes it more enjoyable.

제안: Be careful with word choice and repetition. Also, clarify your answer by directly stating your preference and which type is more difficult, using linking words to connect your ideas.

예시: I like completing number puzzles because they challenge my logical thinking, whereas word puzzles are more difficult for me to solve.

제안: Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and sentence clarity. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific reasons why puzzles are beneficial for older people.

예시: I think puzzles are very important for older people because they help keep the mind active and improve intelligence. Moreover, puzzles serve as a relaxing leisure activity that can reduce stress.

× When I was child I did a lot of puzzles, like completing puzzles was a very exciting activity for me and when I completed budget I felt over the moon.

✓ When I was a child I did a lot of puzzles, like completing puzzles was a very exciting activity for me and when I completed a puzzle I felt over the moon.

The word 'child' is singular and needs the article 'a' before it to be grammatically correct. Also, 'budget' seems to be a typo and should be 'puzzle' to make sense in context. Adding 'a' before 'puzzle' is necessary because it is a singular countable noun.

× I usually completed the puzzle when I was bored and I preferred to do complete puzzle with my family and friends.

✓ I usually complete puzzles when I am bored and I prefer to complete puzzles with my family and friends.

The question asks about habitual actions, so the present simple tense 'usually complete' and 'prefer' should be used instead of past tense. Also, 'do complete puzzle' is incorrect; it should be 'complete puzzles' to express the activity properly.

× Sometime my Big Brother help me to complete the final.

✓ Sometimes my big brother helps me to complete the final puzzle.

'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Big Brother' should not be capitalised unless it is a proper noun or title. 'Help' needs to be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'my big brother'. Adding 'puzzle' clarifies what 'the final' refers to.

× I like complete number puzzles and what what puzzles are very difficult for me to complete.

✓ I like completing number puzzles and word puzzles are very difficult for me to complete.

The verb 'like' should be followed by the gerund form 'completing' to express preference. 'What what' is a typo and should be 'word'. Also, 'word puzzles' is plural to match the context.

× I think it is very important for them because it make them like more active and intelligent.

✓ I think it is very important for them because it makes them more active and intelligent.

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. The phrase 'like more active' is incorrect; 'more active' is sufficient without 'like'.

× So it is a leisure activity for old people and it may it also make them relax.

✓ So it is a leisure activity for old people and it may also make them relax.

The phrase 'may it also make' is incorrect; it should be 'may also make'. The verb 'make' is correct here because 'may' is a modal verb followed by the base form of the verb.