Puzzles— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to use past tense consistently and avoid repeating words. Also, make your sentences clearer and more concise.

예시: Yes, I often played puzzles during my childhood because my father used to buy me math-related puzzles. They helped me think critically and improve my multiplication skills.

제안: Your answer is clear but contains some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use plural forms correctly and improve sentence flow by using linking words appropriately.

예시: I usually do puzzles both during trips and in my free time because they are a relaxing pastime. Moreover, when I feel stressed, solving puzzles helps me to feel relieved and happier.

제안: There are some vocabulary errors and unclear expressions. For example, 'remember puzzles' is incorrect. Also, you did not directly answer which type is more difficult. Be sure to answer both parts of the question clearly.

예시: I prefer number puzzles because my father taught me how to solve math problems when I was young. Thanks to this early practice, I find number puzzles easier than word puzzles, which I find more challenging.

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Avoid vague phrases like 'not considerable' and improve sentence structure. Also, provide more specific reasons and use linking words to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, I think puzzles are good for older people because they are easy to play and can help keep their brains active. This mental exercise may reduce the risk of diseases like dementia.

× Yes, of course I always play some puzzle in my childhood because my my father always buys some puzzle related to mathematics that help me keep thinking and remember how to multiple some numbers quickly.

✓ Yes, of course I always played some puzzles in my childhood because my father always bought some puzzles related to mathematics that helped me keep thinking and remember how to multiply some numbers quickly.

The sentence incorrectly uses present tense verbs ('play', 'buys', 'help') when referring to past events ('in my childhood'). The verbs should be in the past tense to match the time frame. Also, 'multiple' is a wrong form; the correct verb is 'multiply'. Additionally, 'some puzzle' should be plural 'some puzzles' because it refers to multiple items.

× Yes, of course I always play some puzzle in my childhood because my my father always buys some puzzle related to mathematics that help me keep thinking and remember how to multiple some numbers quickly.

✓ Yes, of course I always played some puzzles in my childhood because my father always bought some puzzles related to mathematics that helped me keep thinking and remember how to multiply some numbers quickly.

The noun 'puzzle' should be plural 'puzzles' because it refers to multiple items. Using singular 'puzzle' here is incorrect when talking about more than one.

× Yes, of course I always play some puzzle in my childhood because my my father always buys some puzzle related to mathematics that help me keep thinking and remember how to multiple some numbers quickly.

✓ Yes, of course I always played some puzzles in my childhood because my father always bought some puzzles related to mathematics that helped me keep thinking and remember how to multiply some numbers quickly.

The verbs 'play', 'buys', and 'help' should be in past tense ('played', 'bought', 'helped') to correctly describe actions that happened in the past.

× I usually do puzzles both during my trip and my free time. Doing puzzle is a relaxing pass time for me and I often enjoy playing them in my free time. Additionally, when I feel stressed, solving puzzle can help me feel relief and more happier.

✓ I usually do puzzles both during my trips and my free time. Doing puzzles is a relaxing pastime for me and I often enjoy playing them in my free time. Additionally, when I feel stressed, solving puzzles can help me feel relieved and happier.

'Trip' should be plural 'trips' to match the context of multiple occasions. 'Puzzle' should be plural 'puzzles' when referring generally. 'Pass time' is incorrect; the correct word is 'pastime'. 'Feel relief' should be 'feel relieved' because 'relieved' is the adjective describing the feeling. 'More happier' is incorrect; 'happier' alone is the correct comparative form.

× I usually do puzzles both during my trip and my free time. Doing puzzle is a relaxing pass time for me and I often enjoy playing them in my free time. Additionally, when I feel stressed, solving puzzle can help me feel relief and more happier.

✓ I usually do puzzles both during my trips and my free time. Doing puzzles is a relaxing pastime for me and I often enjoy playing them in my free time. Additionally, when I feel stressed, solving puzzles can help me feel relieved and happier.

The noun 'puzzle' should be plural 'puzzles' when referring to the activity in general. Also, 'trip' should be plural 'trips' to indicate multiple occasions.

× Additionally, when I feel stressed, solving puzzle can help me feel relief and more happier.

✓ Additionally, when I feel stressed, solving puzzles can help me feel relieved and happier.

'Feel relief' is incorrect because 'relief' is a noun; the correct adjective is 'relieved'. Also, 'more happier' is redundant; 'happier' alone is the correct comparative form.

× I enjoy doing remember puzzles because my father used to teach me how to solve some mathematical problems when I was a kid.

✓ I enjoy doing number puzzles because my father used to teach me how to solve some mathematical problems when I was a kid.

'Remember puzzles' is incorrect; the intended phrase is 'number puzzles'. This is a vocabulary error rather than a grammar issue, but correcting it clarifies the meaning.

× I enjoy doing remember puzzles because my father used to teach me how to solve some mathematical problems when I was a kid.

✓ I enjoy doing number puzzles because my father used to teach me how to solve some mathematical problems when I was a kid.

No preposition error here; correction is for vocabulary only.

× I found it fascinating to figure out some solution in number games.

✓ I found it fascinating to figure out some solutions to number games.

'Figure out some solution in number games' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'to' after 'figure out some solutions'. Also, 'solution' should be plural 'solutions' to match the context.

× I found it fascinating to figure out some solution in number games.

✓ I found it fascinating to figure out some solutions to number games.

'Solution' should be plural 'solutions' because it refers to multiple possible answers.

× I found it fascinating to figure out some solution in number games.

✓ I found it fascinating to figure out some solutions to number games.

'In' is incorrect here; the correct preposition is 'to' after 'figure out some solutions'.

× Yes, of course, because playing some video game is not considerable for old people to play and playing some puzzle is an easy game for old people to do in their free time because playing some puzzle can make their brain function faster and avoid them on suffering some disease.

✓ Yes, of course, because playing some video games is not suitable for old people, and playing puzzles is an easy game for old people to do in their free time because playing puzzles can make their brain function faster and help them avoid suffering from some diseases.

The pronoun 'them' is used incorrectly with 'avoid'; the correct structure is 'help them avoid'. Also, 'on suffering' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'from suffering'. Additionally, 'some video game' and 'some puzzle' should be plural 'some video games' and 'puzzles' to match the context.

× Yes, of course, because playing some video game is not considerable for old people to play and playing some puzzle is an easy game for old people to do in their free time because playing some puzzle can make their brain function faster and avoid them on suffering some disease.

✓ Yes, of course, because playing some video games is not suitable for old people, and playing puzzles is an easy game for old people to do in their free time because playing puzzles can make their brain function faster and help them avoid suffering from some diseases.

'Video game' and 'puzzle' should be plural ('video games', 'puzzles') because the sentence refers to these activities in general.

× Yes, of course, because playing some video game is not considerable for old people to play and playing some puzzle is an easy game for old people to do in their free time because playing some puzzle can make their brain function faster and avoid them on suffering some disease.

✓ Yes, of course, because playing some video games is not suitable for old people, and playing puzzles is an easy game for old people to do in their free time because playing puzzles can make their brain function faster and help them avoid suffering from some diseases.

'Considerable' is incorrectly used; the correct adjective is 'suitable' to express appropriateness.