Puzzles— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer needs to be clearer and more grammatically correct. Try to directly answer the question first, then add specific details with proper linking words. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases.

예시: Yes, I used to solve various puzzles during my childhood. One of my favorites was number puzzles because they helped improve my creativity and problem-solving skills. For example, my teacher often encouraged us to solve these puzzles to enhance our thinking abilities.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. Be specific and avoid vague phrases.

예시: I usually do puzzles both when I am traveling and when I feel bored. For instance, last weekend I went to Shimla and spent time solving different puzzles, which helped sharpen my mind and boost my confidence.

제안: Your answer should be more coherent and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain your preference and difficulty with examples. Use linking words to connect ideas.

예시: I prefer doing number puzzles because they are easier for me since I am familiar with numbers. However, word puzzles are more difficult as they challenge the brain to think differently and find the right words.

제안: Your answer needs better grammar and clarity. Provide a clear opinion first, then support it with specific reasons and examples using linking words.

예시: Yes, I think it is good for older people to do puzzles because it sharpens their minds and improves problem-solving skills. For example, my grandfather enjoys number puzzles as he is familiar with them, and we often give him puzzle books to keep him engaged.

× Yes, I'll solve variety of a puzzle during my childhood.

✓ Yes, I solved a variety of puzzles during my childhood.

The sentence refers to a past time ('during my childhood'), so the past tense 'solved' should be used instead of 'I'll solve' which is future tense. Also, 'a variety of a puzzle' is incorrect; it should be 'a variety of puzzles' to match plural form.

× Yes, I'll solve variety of a puzzle during my childhood.

✓ Yes, I solved a variety of puzzles during my childhood.

The phrase 'variety of a puzzle' is incorrect; 'variety' is followed by plural noun without 'a'. So, it should be 'a variety of puzzles'.

× One of my favorite puzzle is number puzzle which improve my creativity and problem solving skills.

✓ One of my favorite puzzles is number puzzles which improve my creativity and problem-solving skills.

'One of my favorite puzzle' should be 'puzzles' (plural) because 'one of' is followed by plural noun. Also, 'number puzzle' should be plural 'number puzzles' to match the context. 'Problem solving' should be hyphenated as 'problem-solving' when used as a compound adjective.

× One of my favorite puzzle is number puzzle which improve my creativity and problem solving skills.

✓ One of my favorite puzzles is number puzzles which improve my creativity and problem-solving skills.

The verb 'improve' should agree with the plural subject 'number puzzles', so 'improve' is correct here. However, if 'number puzzle' is singular, the verb should be 'improves'. Since 'number puzzles' is plural, 'improve' is correct.

× For example, add a teacher often encourage us to do to purchase that will enhance my thinking level.

✓ For example, a teacher often encouraged us to do puzzles that enhanced my thinking skills.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. 'Add a teacher' is incorrect; it should be 'a teacher'. 'Encourage' should be past tense 'encouraged' to match past context. 'To do to purchase' is incorrect; likely intended 'to do puzzles'. 'Enhance my thinking level' is better expressed as 'enhanced my thinking skills'.

× I usually do puzzle in both time when I was going to tips tip or when I feel tedious because when I do this types of a puzzle it has my confidence level also sharpens the mind.

✓ I usually do puzzles both when I am going on trips or when I feel bored because doing these types of puzzles increases my confidence and sharpens the mind.

'Do puzzle' should be 'do puzzles' (plural). 'In both time' is incorrect; 'both when' is better. 'When I was going to tips tip' is unclear; corrected to 'when I am going on trips'. 'Feel tedious' is incorrect; should be 'feel bored'. 'This types of a puzzle' should be 'these types of puzzles'. 'It has my confidence level also sharpens the mind' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'increases my confidence and sharpens the mind'.

× For example on last weekend I went to the Shimla.

✓ For example, last weekend I went to Shimla.

'On last weekend' is incorrect; 'last weekend' is used without 'on'. 'The Shimla' is incorrect; 'Shimla' is a proper noun and does not need 'the'.

× I do variety of puzzles that he has my knowledge.

✓ I did a variety of puzzles that increased my knowledge.

'I do variety of puzzles' should be 'I did a variety of puzzles' to match past tense and include article 'a'. 'That he has my knowledge' is incorrect; corrected to 'that increased my knowledge'.

× Well yes I do numbers personal which is a very easy task for me because we are all we are familiar to all numbers but difficult 1 is a word which can give button on individual brain to crack the word.

✓ Well yes, I do number puzzles which are very easy tasks for me because we are all familiar with numbers, but the difficult one is word puzzles which challenge the brain to crack the words.

'Numbers personal' is incorrect; should be 'number puzzles'. 'Which is a very easy task' should be 'which are very easy tasks' to agree with plural 'puzzles'. 'We are all we are familiar to all numbers' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'we are all familiar with numbers'. 'Difficult 1' should be 'the difficult one'. 'Give button on individual brain' is unclear; corrected to 'challenge the brain'.

× Yes it is a good for older people to do puzzle because it's sharps in their mind and improve problems solving skills and my grandfather usually to number person because he is a family with that and we also gave him book about.

✓ Yes, it is good for older people to do puzzles because it sharpens their minds and improves problem-solving skills. My grandfather usually does number puzzles because he is familiar with them, and we also gave him a book about it.

'It is a good' should be 'it is good' without 'a'. 'Do puzzle' should be 'do puzzles'. 'It's sharps' should be 'it sharpens'. 'Improve problems solving skills' should be 'improves problem-solving skills'. 'My grandfather usually to number person' is incorrect; corrected to 'My grandfather usually does number puzzles'. 'He is a family with that' is unclear; corrected to 'he is familiar with them'. 'We also gave him book about' should be 'we also gave him a book about it'.