Puzzles— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to use correct grammar and avoid repetition. For example, say "No, I didn't have puzzles to play with because my parents were very strict about buying things for me." Also, keep your answer concise and clear.

예시: No, I didn't do puzzles in my childhood because my parents were quite strict and didn't buy many toys for me.

제안: Focus on clear sentence structure and avoid repeating phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, "Although I don't have puzzles, I think I would play them when I feel bored because they help pass the time and stimulate my brain."

예시: Although I don't have puzzles, I think I would play them when I feel bored because they help pass the time and stimulate my brain.

제안: Try to use more precise vocabulary and avoid redundancy. For example, "I prefer number puzzles because word puzzles are more difficult; they require a large vocabulary which I find challenging."

예시: I prefer number puzzles because word puzzles are more difficult; they require a large vocabulary which I find challenging.

제안: Work on sentence clarity and grammar. Use complete sentences and explain your ideas clearly. For example, "Yes, I think puzzles are good for older people because they help improve memory and keep the mind active."

예시: Yes, I think puzzles are good for older people because they help improve memory and keep the mind active.

× No, I didn't. I didn't have puzzles to play because my parents is very parents are very strict to buy something for me.

✓ No, I didn't. I didn't have puzzles to play because my parents are very strict about buying something for me.

The original sentence has a subject-verb agreement error where 'parents is' is incorrect; 'parents' is plural and should be paired with 'are'. Also, the phrase 'very parents are very strict to buy something for me' is awkward and ungrammatical. The correction uses 'are very strict about buying something for me' to express the intended meaning clearly and correctly.

× I don't have puzzles so I cannot say exactly when, but I feel when I feel bored I can play puzzles to kill time and also use a lot of brains so it.

✓ I don't have puzzles so I cannot say exactly when, but I feel that when I feel bored I can play puzzles to kill time and also use a lot of brain power.

The original sentence is somewhat unclear and contains awkward phrasing. 'Use a lot of brains' is not idiomatic; the correct expression is 'use a lot of brain power'. Adding 'that' after 'I feel' improves sentence structure. The sentence is corrected for clarity and idiomatic usage.

× I like doing number puzzles rather than word puzzles. I feel word puzzles are more difficult for me because I need to know a lot of words, then I need to learn a lot of them.

✓ I like doing number puzzles rather than word puzzles. I feel word puzzles are more difficult for me because I need to know a lot of words, and I need to learn many of them.

The original sentence uses 'then' incorrectly to connect two related ideas; 'and' is the appropriate conjunction here. Also, 'a lot of them' is vague; 'many of them' is more precise when referring to countable nouns like words.

× I think so, yes, I do. Old people tend to get the. Forget this something. So puzzle games make them. They're playing clear.

✓ I think so, yes, I do. Old people tend to forget things, so puzzle games help keep their minds clear.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. 'Old people tend to get the. Forget this something.' is incomplete and ungrammatical. The correction combines the ideas into a coherent sentence, using 'forget things' and explaining the benefit of puzzle games clearly.