Puzzles— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer needs to be clearer and more grammatically correct. Avoid redundancy and ensure your sentences are natural and concise. For example, start with a direct response, then add specific details using linking words.

예시: Yes, I often played puzzles with my friends during my childhood because I believed they stimulated my brain and boosted my creativity as we tried to solve them together.

제안: Your answer should directly address the question and avoid vague phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific about when and why you do puzzles.

예시: I usually do puzzles when I feel bored because I want to use my free time productively. Doing puzzles helps me to boost my brain and enhance my creativity.

제안: Your answer should be more structured and grammatically correct. Clearly state your preference and explain why, using linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: I like both word and number puzzles, but I find number puzzles more difficult. This challenge motivates me to think harder and try my best to solve them.

제안: Your answer should be clearer and more natural. Avoid repetition and provide specific reasons with linking words to support your opinion.

예시: Yes, I think it's good for older people to do puzzles because it helps them keep their minds active and provides a good opportunity to socialise and enjoy new experiences.

× Yes, when I was shot I'm always play puzzle with so many my friends because I think it's stimulate my brain and also can boost creativity because we try to solve the puzzle.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I always played puzzles with many of my friends because I thought it stimulated my brain and also could boost creativity as we tried to solve the puzzles.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'was shot' instead of 'was a child' and mixes tenses. 'I'm always play' should be past tense 'I always played' to match 'when I was a child'. 'Stimulate' should be past tense 'stimulated' to agree with past context. 'Can boost' should be 'could boost' to maintain past tense consistency. Also, 'so many my friends' is incorrect; it should be 'many of my friends'.

× Yes, I'm constantly play puzzle when I feel bored because I want to utilize my free time with something beneficial.

✓ Yes, I constantly play puzzles when I feel bored because I want to use my free time for something beneficial.

The phrase 'I'm constantly play' is incorrect; it should be 'I constantly play' to use the simple present tense correctly. 'Play puzzle' should be plural 'play puzzles' as puzzles is countable and plural here. 'Utilize' is acceptable but 'use' is more natural. 'With something beneficial' should be 'for something beneficial' to use the correct preposition.

× So I do puzzle to boost my brain and also my creativity as well as.

✓ So I do puzzles to boost my brain and also my creativity.

'Do puzzle' should be 'do puzzles' to use the plural form. The phrase 'as well as' at the end is unnecessary and incomplete, so it is removed for clarity.

× I like doing number puzzles and word puzzle because number puzzle is more difficult.

✓ I like doing number puzzles and word puzzles because number puzzles are more difficult.

'Word puzzle' should be plural 'word puzzles' to match 'number puzzles'. Also, 'number puzzle is' should be 'number puzzles are' to agree in number with the plural subject.

× So I think that challenge when I doing number puzzle is boost my thing to solve it and try hard to solve it.

✓ So I think that the challenge when I do number puzzles is that it boosts my thinking to solve it and I try hard to solve it.

'When I doing' is incorrect; it should be 'when I do' to use the simple present tense. 'Number puzzle' should be plural 'number puzzles'. 'Is boost my thing' is incorrect; it should be 'it boosts my thinking'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I think yes because when old people do puzzle they can utilize their life to try try use their brain well and also makes the good experience and meet up.

✓ I think yes because when old people do puzzles they can use their time to exercise their brain well and also have good experiences and socialise.

'Do puzzle' should be 'do puzzles' (plural). 'Utilize their life to try try use their brain well' is awkward and repetitive; it is corrected to 'use their time to exercise their brain well'. 'Makes the good experience and meet up' is incorrect; it is corrected to 'have good experiences and socialise' for clarity and grammatical correctness.