Puzzles— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中时态使用不准确，且表达不够自然流畅。建议注意时态一致性，简洁表达观点，并避免语法错误。

예시: Yes, I enjoyed doing puzzles when I was a child because they helped me develop my thinking and problem-solving skills. Even now, I still like to do puzzles with my family and friends.

제안: 回答内容不够清晰，表达混乱，缺少连贯的逻辑。建议简化句子结构，明确表达做拼图的时间和原因。

예시: I usually do puzzles when I feel bored because they can keep me occupied for a long time. Also, puzzles are challenging since we need to find the corner pieces first to make it easier.

제안: 表达不够自然，语法和用词有误。建议使用更准确的词汇和句型，清晰说明原因。

예시: I find word puzzles more difficult because there are so many different words, and it's hard to quickly think of the right word that fits the puzzle.

제안: 句子结构混乱，表达不清晰。建议简化句子，使用正确的语法，明确说明益处。

예시: Yes, I believe puzzles are good for older people because they help improve concentration, expand vocabulary, and keep the brain active.

× Yes, I really like playing puzzles when I'm a kid as I think puzzles quite training my thinking skills or problem solving skills and until now I will still do puzzles with my family or even friends.

✓ Yes, I really liked playing puzzles when I was a kid as I think puzzles quite train my thinking skills or problem solving skills and until now I still do puzzles with my family or even friends.

这里的时间是过去时态，描述童年时的习惯动作，应该用过去时态like改为liked，am改为was。

× Yes, I really like playing puzzles when I'm a kid as I think puzzles quite training my thinking skills or problem solving skills and until now I will still do puzzles with my family or even friends.

✓ Yes, I really liked playing puzzles when I was a kid as I think puzzles quite train my thinking skills or problem solving skills and until now I still do puzzles with my family or even friends.

句中quite后面应接动词原形train，而不是动名词training。

× Yes, I really like playing puzzles when I'm a kid as I think puzzles quite training my thinking skills or problem solving skills and until now I will still do puzzles with my family or even friends.

✓ Yes, I really liked playing puzzles when I was a kid as I think puzzles quite train my thinking skills or problem solving skills and until now I still do puzzles with my family or even friends.

句中表达现在仍然做拼图，will用法不当，应直接用现在时态still do。

× I usually do puzzles when I'm bored because I think doing puzzles can spend a lot of time and because puzzles aren't easy and we need to find those pieces on the corner and so as to easy.

✓ I usually do puzzles when I'm bored because I think doing puzzles can take a lot of time and because puzzles aren't easy and we need to find those pieces in the corners to make it easier.

can spend a lot of time用法不当，应该用can take a lot of time；on the corner应为in the corners；so as to easy结构错误，改为to make it easier。

× I usually do puzzles when I'm bored because I think doing puzzles can spend a lot of time and because puzzles aren't easy and we need to find those pieces on the corner and so as to easy.

✓ I usually do puzzles when I'm bored because I think doing puzzles can take a lot of time and because puzzles aren't easy and we need to find those pieces in the corners to make it easier.

介词on the corner用错，拼图的角落应使用in the corners。

× I think word puzzles are harder because there are many different kinds of words in the world, so it is hard to think of a word that matches the puzzle in a suddenly.

✓ I think word puzzles are harder because there are many different kinds of words in the world, so it is hard to think of a word that suddenly matches the puzzle.

副词suddenly位置错误，应放在动词matches前面。

× Yes, I think doing puzzles can train their concentration and also learn different kind of words and to train their brain actively because as old people less seldom to use their brains.

✓ Yes, I think doing puzzles can train their concentration and also help them learn different kinds of words and train their brains actively because old people seldom use their brains.

different kind应为different kinds；less seldom用法错误，seldom本身表示频率，不能与less连用；to use改为use。