Puzzles— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Jawaban Anda sudah menjawab pertanyaan, tetapi kalimatnya agak panjang dan kurang terstruktur dengan baik. Cobalah untuk membuat kalimat yang lebih singkat dan jelas, serta gunakan kata penghubung yang tepat untuk memperjelas alasan Anda.

예시: Yes, I did puzzles when I was a child, but I rarely played them because I found them difficult to understand and solve at that age.

제안: Jawaban Anda kurang terstruktur dan ada kesalahan tata bahasa. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih jelas dan gunakan kata penghubung untuk menjelaskan urutan kejadian dengan baik.

예시: I usually do puzzles when I feel bored. At first, I try to solve them by myself, but if I find them too difficult, I ask my family for help.

제안: Jawaban Anda mengandung pengulangan dan kesalahan tata bahasa. Cobalah untuk menyusun kalimat yang lebih ringkas dan jelas, serta gunakan kosakata yang tepat untuk menjelaskan alasan Anda.

예시: I prefer word puzzles because they are easier for me. Number puzzles are more difficult since I have to select and rearrange numbers, which I find challenging.

제안: Jawaban Anda sudah cukup baik, tetapi kalimatnya bisa dibuat lebih alami dan jelas. Gunakan kosakata yang tepat untuk menjelaskan manfaatnya secara spesifik.

예시: Yes, I believe puzzles are beneficial for everyone, especially number puzzles, because they help improve brain function and keep older people mentally active.

× Yes, I did puzzles in my childhood but it was rarely because I think it is hard to do puzzles especially when I was young and I don't understand what and how the game was.

✓ Yes, I did puzzles in my childhood but it was rare because I thought it was hard to do puzzles especially when I was young and I didn't understand what and how the game was.

The word 'rarely' is an adverb, but the sentence requires an adjective 'rare' to describe the frequency. Also, the tense should be consistent in past tense when talking about childhood, so 'think' changes to 'thought' and 'don't understand' to 'didn't understand'.

× I played puzzle when I was bored and at that time I was like try to do it with my own but I found it really hard so I. Ask for help with my family.

✓ I played puzzles when I was bored and at that time I tried to do it on my own but I found it really hard so I asked for help from my family.

The verb 'try' should be in past tense 'tried' to match the past context. 'With my own' is incorrect; it should be 'on my own'. 'Ask' should be past tense 'asked'. Also, 'puzzle' should be plural 'puzzles' to match the context.

× I like doing word puzzles more, but I think the number puzzles is more difficult because I it I have to choose and I have to rearrange the number and I was so difficult about it.

✓ I like doing word puzzles more, but I think the number puzzles are more difficult because I have to choose and rearrange the numbers and it was very difficult for me.

'Number puzzles' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. 'Number' should be plural 'numbers' to match the plural context. 'I was so difficult about it' is incorrect; it should be 'it was very difficult for me'.

× I played puzzle when I was bored and at that time I was like try to do it with my own but I found it really hard so I. Ask for help with my family.

✓ I played puzzles when I was bored and at that time I tried to do it on my own but I found it really hard so I asked for help from my family.

The phrase 'with my own' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'on my own' to indicate doing something independently. Also, 'Ask' should be 'asked' to maintain past tense.

× I played puzzle when I was bored and at that time I was like try to do it with my own but I found it really hard so I. Ask for help with my family.

✓ I played puzzles when I was bored and at that time I tried to do it on my own but I found it really hard so I asked for help from my family.

The preposition 'with' is incorrect in 'ask for help with my family'; the correct preposition is 'from' to indicate the source of help.