Puzzles— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete. Try to give a direct response first, then add specific examples. Avoid unfinished sentences and redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: No, I did not do many puzzles in my childhood. However, I enjoyed playing chess and other mind games that challenged my thinking skills.

제안: Your answer is good but a bit informal and incomplete at the end. Try to use more formal language and complete your sentences. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to make your answer coherent.

예시: I usually do puzzles when I feel bored because trips are better spent enjoying outdoor activities and nature. Therefore, puzzles are more suitable for relaxing at home with friends.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and lacks clarity. Try to give a clear opinion first, then explain your reason with specific details. Avoid unfinished sentences and use linking words to connect ideas.

예시: I prefer number puzzles because I am good at math. On the other hand, word puzzles are more difficult for me since I find vocabulary challenging.

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains informal language and filler words. Try to speak more fluently and use formal expressions. Also, provide more specific reasons and examples.

예시: Yes, I believe puzzles are very beneficial for elderly people because they help keep the mind active. For example, doing puzzles can reduce the risk of Alzheimer's disease by stimulating brain function.

× I did love things alike.

✓ I did love things like that.

The word 'alike' is incorrectly used here as an adverb. The correct phrase is 'things like that' to express similarity. 'Alike' is typically used as an adjective, not to modify 'things' in this context.

× I say I loved playing chess and I loved the kind of mind exercises for a child, but I was never.

✓ I would say I loved playing chess and I loved the kind of mind exercises for a child, but I was never really into puzzles.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks clarity. Adding 'really into puzzles' completes the thought and improves sentence structure.

× I think trips are not the right time to do puzzles because you gotta enjoy all the other activities you could do, like going outdoors, enjoying the nature.

✓ I think trips are not the right time to do puzzles because you gotta enjoy all the other activities you could do, like going outdoors, enjoying nature.

The phrase 'enjoying the nature' is incorrect; 'nature' is an uncountable noun and does not require the definite article 'the' in this context.

× But whenever I get bored and I want something challenging, I start doing puzzles with my friends and we started.

✓ But whenever I get bored and want something challenging, I start doing puzzles with my friends and we keep doing them.

The sentence mixes present and past tense improperly and ends abruptly. Changing 'we started' to 'we keep doing them' maintains tense consistency and completes the idea.

× I have never been into puzzles that much to know the difference between the word puzzles or the number puzzles, but I guess I would struggle with the word puzzles more because I am really into math and I think I'm really good at it.

✓ I have never been into puzzles that much to know the difference between word puzzles and number puzzles, but I guess I would struggle with word puzzles more because I am really into math and I think I'm really good at it.

The phrase 'difference between the word puzzles or the number puzzles' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'and' to compare two items.

× I don't think I will have any problems with the numbers as long as.

✓ I don't think I will have any problems with numbers as long as I keep practicing.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a concluding clause. Adding 'I keep practicing' completes the thought and improves clarity.

× Many of old people may, uh, get Alzheimer's disease and I think puzzles is something that would help, uh, to prevent this awful disease.

✓ Many old people may, uh, get Alzheimer's disease and I think puzzles are something that would help, uh, to prevent this awful disease.

The phrase 'Many of old people' is incorrect; it should be 'Many old people' without 'of'. Also, 'puzzles is' should be 'puzzles are' to agree in number with the plural subject.