Puzzles— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中有重复和语法错误，影响了表达的自然性和流畅性。建议简洁明了地回答问题，避免重复，并使用正确的时态和语法结构。

예시: No, I didn't do puzzles when I was a child because I wasn't familiar with them, and the people around me didn't play them either.

제안: 回答不够清晰，表达含糊且有语法错误。建议直接回答问题，使用连贯的句子，并避免无关内容。

예시: I usually play games when I feel bored, but I don't do puzzles because I'm not familiar with them.

제안: 回答中有多处语法错误和口语填充词，影响表达的清晰度。建议使用正确的语法，减少口语填充词，并直接回答问题。

예시: I find both word and number puzzles difficult because I haven't tried them much, but I think number puzzles might be harder for me.

제안: 回答内容较好，但有语法错误和词汇使用不当。建议注意名词和动词的搭配，使用准确的词汇。

예시: Yes, definitely. Older people have a higher risk of developing dementia, so doing puzzles can help prevent this disease and is beneficial for their health.

× Not really. And and never did a puzzle when I was a kid because I was not familiar with such game.

✓ Not really. And I never did a puzzle when I was a kid because I was not familiar with such games.

The sentence is missing the subject 'I' before 'never did'. Also, 'such game' should be plural 'such games' because it refers to a general category of games. The past tense 'did' is correct here because the action happened in the past.

× And uh, of course the people around me. Yeah, hadn't never tried tried this game.

✓ And, of course, the people around me hadn't ever tried this game.

The phrase 'hadn't never tried tried' is incorrect due to double negation and repetition. 'Hadn't ever tried' is the correct form. Also, 'hadn't' requires a subject and auxiliary verb structure, which is correctly used here.

× Well to be honest, I never do puzzles and more Olive Italy I even have no idea about puzzles.

✓ Well, to be honest, I never do puzzles and moreover, I even have no idea about puzzles.

The phrase 'more Olive Italy' is a mishearing or typo of 'moreover'. Adding commas improves clarity. The present tense 'do' is appropriate here as the speaker talks about current habits.

× Umm so umm yeah. During my trip or when I feel bored I do all the games.

✓ Umm, so umm, yeah. During my trip or when I feel bored, I play all the games.

The phrase 'do all the games' is unnatural; 'play all the games' is the correct collocation. Commas are added for clarity. Present tense 'feel' and 'play' are appropriate for habitual actions.

× Well, they all sound difficult, right? Umm, well, yeah, I have never do anything about parcels, so let me guess, I think, well, number puzzles maybe could be more difficult for people.

✓ Well, they all sound difficult, right? Umm, well, yeah, I have never done anything about puzzles, so let me guess, I think number puzzles might be more difficult for people.

'Have never do' is incorrect; the present perfect requires the past participle 'done'. 'Parcels' is a mispronunciation of 'puzzles'. 'Maybe could be' is redundant; 'might be' is more appropriate.

× Yeah, I have no idea baby. I will try in the future and we'll get the answer.

✓ Yeah, I have no idea, baby. I will try in the future and we'll get the answer.

The sentence is mostly correct. Adding a comma after 'idea' improves clarity. 'Will try' and 'we'll get' correctly express future intentions.

× Yeah, definitely. Because early people has a higher risk for dementia developing.

✓ Yeah, definitely. Because elderly people have a higher risk of developing dementia.

'Early people' is incorrect; the correct term is 'elderly people'. 'Has' should be 'have' to agree with the plural subject 'people'. The phrase 'risk for dementia developing' should be 'risk of developing dementia'.

× So doing parcels could be helpful to prevent this disease.

✓ So doing puzzles could be helpful to prevent this disease.

'Parcels' is a mispronunciation of 'puzzles'. The gerund 'doing' is correctly used here. The sentence is otherwise correct.