Puzzles— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to use correct articles and plural forms, and avoid repeating similar ideas. Also, keep your answer concise and natural.

예시: Yes, I enjoyed doing puzzles in my childhood, especially challenging cube-shaped ones.

제안: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, correct singular/plural forms and make your sentences clearer and more natural.

예시: I usually do puzzles when I feel bored because they keep my mind active and help me focus on one thing.

제안: Your answer has several grammatical mistakes and unclear expressions. Use correct vocabulary and sentence structure. Avoid redundancy and clarify your preferences clearly.

예시: I prefer number puzzles because I enjoy working with numbers more than words, which I find boring.

제안: Try to avoid excessive filler words and unclear phrases. Use linking words to organize your ideas logically. Be specific and clear about the benefits of puzzles for old people.

예시: Yes, I think puzzles are very good for old people because they help keep the mind active and reduce stress related to nervous problems.

× Yes, I did a puzzles in my childhood because I love solving the difficult puzzles which are in shape of cube.

✓ Yes, I did puzzles in my childhood because I love solving difficult puzzles which are in the shape of a cube.

The word 'puzzles' is plural, so the article 'a' should not be used before it. Also, 'the difficult puzzles' should be 'difficult puzzles' without 'the' to generalize, and 'in shape of cube' should be 'in the shape of a cube' to be grammatically correct.

× I do puzzles, uh, when I feel bored because, uh, while doing puzzles, it's it, it keeps my mind active and fresh so that it helps to be focused on one things.

✓ I do puzzles when I feel bored because while doing puzzles, it keeps my mind active and fresh so that it helps me to focus on one thing.

The phrase 'helps to be focused' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me to focus'. Also, 'one things' is incorrect because 'one' is singular and 'things' is plural; it should be 'one thing'. The repeated 'it's it, it' is redundant and removed for clarity.

× I prefer number poses because I love solving numbers rather than words because solving words puzzles I find very boring.

✓ I prefer number puzzles because I love solving numbers rather than words because solving word puzzles I find very boring.

The word 'poses' is a typo and should be 'puzzles'. Also, 'words puzzles' should be 'word puzzles' because 'word' acts as an adjective here and should be singular.

× I want, I love and I'm very forward to solve a normal problem.

✓ I want to, I love to, and I'm very eager to solve a normal problem.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'I'm very forward' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'I'm very eager'. Also, 'I want' and 'I love' need the infinitive form 'to' followed by the verb 'solve' to be grammatically correct.

× Yes, definitely It is one of the best idea for old people to do puzzles because, uh, while solving problems, it helps divert our mind from different, uh, thinking, uh, such as, uh, it helps to reduce, uh, some of the uh, problems, uh, which is linked with our nerves, uh, while solving problem.

✓ Yes, definitely it is one of the best ideas for old people to do puzzles because while solving problems, it helps divert our minds from different kinds of thinking, such as reducing some of the problems which are linked with our nerves while solving problems.

'One of the best idea' should be 'one of the best ideas' because 'one of the' is followed by a plural noun. 'Our mind' should be 'our minds' to agree with plural possessors. 'Which is linked' should be 'which are linked' to agree with plural 'problems'. Also, 'while solving problem' should be 'while solving problems' for consistency.