Jewelry— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，且句子结构较为简单。建议注意时态和介词的正确使用，避免语法错误，同时使表达更自然流畅。

예시: I don't often wear jewelry because I am still a student and usually don't have occasions for it. However, if I meet someone important, I wear jewelry to show my respect.

제안: 表达不够清晰，语法和词汇使用有误。建议使用更准确的形容词和句型来描述喜好，使表达更自然。

예시: I prefer silver jewelry because it looks simple and comfortable rather than flashy or sparkling.

제안: 回答中断且语法错误较多，表达不连贯。建议练习完整句子表达，注意时态一致性和句子连贯性。

예시: I rarely buy jewelry because I don't have many occasions to wear them. However, I sometimes purchase some during shopping holidays when supermarkets offer discounts and promotions.

제안: 回答内容混乱，语法和表达错误较多，逻辑不清晰。建议理清思路，使用完整句子表达观点，并用连接词使内容连贯。

예시: Some people wear a piece of jewelry for a long time because it is expensive and they cannot afford many. Also, some jewelry has special meanings, such as gifts from their parents, symbolizing love or good luck.

× But if I will meet an important man or woman, I will wear jewelry to show how I respect of them.

✓ But if I meet an important man or woman, I will wear jewelry to show how I respect them.

这里的条件句中，表示将来的条件从句不应该用“will”，应该用一般现在时。并且“respect”后面不需要介词“of”，直接加宾语。

× I don't like those jewelry look sparking.

✓ I don't like those jewelry that look sparkling.

“jewelry”是不可数名词，前面用“those”不合适，应该用“that”引导定语从句；“sparking”应为“sparkling”，表示闪闪发光的。

× I like those look more easy and more comfortable style.

✓ I like those that look easier and more comfortable in style.

“easy”应使用比较级“easier”，且“style”前应加介词短语“in style”来修饰。

× Well, I seldom do that because I didn't have any occasion to wear them.

✓ Well, I seldom do that because I don't have any occasion to wear them.

前半句用一般现在时“seldom do”，后半句应保持时态一致，使用一般现在时“don't have”。

× Well, actually, I often. Buy some during the shopping holidays when those supermarket will offer some good discount and promotions.

✓ Well, actually, I often buy some during the shopping holidays when those supermarkets offer good discounts and promotions.

“I often buy”不应断句；“supermarket”应复数“supermarkets”；“will offer”改为一般现在时“offer”，表示习惯性动作；“discount”应复数“discounts”。

× On one hand, luxurious. Who is expensive?

✓ On one hand, they are luxurious and expensive.

原句结构不完整，缺少主语和谓语，且“Who is expensive?”不合适，应改为完整句子表达。

× People don't have many money to buy a lot of them, so they buy one or two and wear them all the day.

✓ People don't have much money to buy a lot of them, so they buy one or two and wear them all day.

“money”是不可数名词，前面应使用“much”而非“many”；“all the day”应改为“all day”。

× some of those jewelry will have special meanings which given by their parents and show their parents love or good luck.

✓ Some of those pieces of jewelry will have special meanings which are given by their parents and show their parents' love or bring good luck.

“jewelry”是不可数名词，需用“pieces of jewelry”；“which given”缺少被动语态助动词“are”；“parents love”应为“parents' love”；“show”改为“bring”更合适表达带来好运。