Jewelry— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is understandable but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Avoid repeating words like "I'm a I'm" and use the correct plural form "jewelry" (uncountable noun). Also, try to make your sentences more concise and natural by combining ideas smoothly.

예시: No, I seldom wear jewelry because I'm still a student. However, when I attend parties, I like to wear some pieces to feel more elegant and beautiful.

제안: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Make sure to use correct vocabulary and complete your thoughts. For example, "anesthetic" is incorrect here. Try to explain why you like necklaces and bracelets with clear reasons and complete sentences.

예시: I like necklaces and bracelets the most because they can add style to plain clothes and make my outfit look more exquisite.

제안: Your answer has several unclear parts and grammatical mistakes. Avoid repeating "jewelries" and use the correct term "jewelry." Also, the phrase "like Nestle to be A" is confusing. Try to express your ideas clearly and directly, and avoid unnecessary repetition.

예시: No, I don't usually buy jewelry because I'm a student. But I would like to buy some pieces that match my clothes in the future.

제안: Your answer has some grammar errors and unclear words like "juries" instead of "jewelry." Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas more smoothly and provide more specific reasons.

예시: I think some people wear jewelry for a long time because it helps them feel elegant and confident. For example, when meeting important people, wearing jewelry can make them appear more formal and professional.

× No, I'm a I'm still a student so I seldom wear jewelries, but if I participate in the party I will wear some jewelries to make me feel more delicate and beautiful.

✓ No, I'm still a student so I seldom wear jewelry, but if I participate in a party I will wear some jewelry to make me feel more delicate and beautiful.

The word 'jewelry' is an uncountable noun and does not have a plural form. Using 'jewelries' is incorrect. Also, 'the party' should be 'a party' because it refers to any party, not a specific one.

× I like necklace and bracelets the most because sometimes our clothes are too plain, so anesthetic will. The exquisite.

✓ I like necklaces and bracelets the most because sometimes our clothes are too plain, so accessories can make them look more exquisite.

The word 'necklace' should be plural 'necklaces' to match 'bracelets' as both are countable and plural here. The original sentence also contains unclear phrases; 'anesthetic will. The exquisite.' is incorrect and unclear, so it was corrected to a meaningful phrase.

× No I don't. I seldom buy jewelries as aforementioned. I'm a student but I want to buy some jewelries like Nestle to be A to match my clothes.

✓ No, I don't. I seldom buy jewelry as aforementioned. I'm a student but I want to buy some jewelry like necklaces to match my clothes.

Again, 'jewelries' is incorrect; 'jewelry' is uncountable. Also, 'Nestle to be A' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo; it was corrected to 'necklaces' to fit the context.

× I think though, one of the reasons is they want to keep them elegant and exquisite. For example, if they they're going to meet some important people, wearing juries can make them feel more formal.

✓ I think, though, one of the reasons is they want to keep themselves elegant and exquisite. For example, if they are going to meet some important people, wearing jewelry can make them feel more formal.

The word 'juries' is incorrect; it should be 'jewelry'. Also, 'them' should be 'themselves' to correctly refer back to the subject. 'They're' was corrected to 'are' for clarity.