Jewelry— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to provide a more complete answer by adding reasons or occasions when you wear jewelry, and avoid very short responses. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I usually wear rings and watches because they complement my outfit and have sentimental value. For example, I wear my watch every day to keep track of time.

제안: Make your answer more natural and grammatically correct by restructuring the sentence. Also, add supporting details to explain why you like these types of jewelry.

예시: I like rings and watches the most because they are both stylish and practical. For instance, I enjoy wearing a watch as it helps me stay punctual.

제안: Provide a clearer and more complete answer by using full sentences and explaining the reasons or occasions for buying jewelry. Avoid vague expressions like 'maybe'.

예시: I usually buy jewelry two or three times a year, especially during special occasions like birthdays or holidays.

제안: Improve your answer by using correct grammar and providing specific reasons. Use linking words to make your explanation clearer and more coherent.

예시: I think some people wear a piece of jewelry for a long time because it has sentimental value. For example, it might be a gift from a loved one or a family heirloom, so they feel emotionally connected to it.

× Most jewelry I like it's rings and watches.

✓ Most jewelry I like is rings and watches.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'it's' which is a contraction for 'it is'. Here, 'Most jewelry' is singular, so the verb should be 'is' without the pronoun 'it'. The correct structure is 'Most jewelry I like is rings and watches.' This corrects the pronoun misuse and subject-verb agreement.

× Maybe two or three times on a year.

✓ Maybe two or three times a year.

The preposition 'on' is incorrectly used with 'a year'. The correct preposition is omitted here; the phrase should be 'a year' without 'on'. 'On' is used with specific days or dates, not with periods like 'a year'.

× I think some people wear piece of jewelry for a long time because maybe this jewelry connected with them so.

✓ I think some people wear a piece of jewelry for a long time because maybe this jewelry is connected with them.

The phrase 'piece of jewelry' requires the article 'a' before 'piece' because it is singular. Also, the sentence lacks the verb 'is' before 'connected', which is necessary for correct sentence structure. The word 'so' at the end is unnecessary and should be removed for clarity.