Jewelry— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中存在语法错误，如“don't like wear jewelry”应为“don't like to wear jewelry”，同时表达不够简洁自然。建议注意动词不定式的使用，并简化句子结构，使表达更流畅。

예시: Actually, I don't often wear jewelry because I have sensitive skin, and it makes me uncomfortable. Also, wearing jewelry is not very convenient for my daily life.

제안: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，如“golden jewelries”应为“golden jewelry”，且表达不够连贯。建议使用连词连接句子，避免重复，并注意名词的单复数形式。

예시: I like golden jewelry because, in China, gold symbolizes wealth and many people prefer wearing gold earrings and other accessories.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，如“like buy jewelries”应为“like to buy jewelry”，“It's make me very have a feel about successful”表达不清。建议加强语法基础，简化句子，并使用恰当的词汇表达感受。

예시: Yes, I like to buy jewelry even though I don't often wear them. I collect jewelry like some people collect stamps, which makes me feel successful. However, I usually buy affordable pieces rather than expensive ones like diamonds.

제안: 回答中表达不清且语法错误较多，如“where jewelry of a long time as a habitat”不符合英语习惯。建议理清思路，使用简单句表达观点，并注意词汇的准确使用。

예시: I think some people wear jewelry for a long time because it has special meaning to them. For example, they may believe that certain earrings bring them good luck and comfort.

× Now in fact, I don't like wear jewelry always because I have sensitive skin and I feel some uncomfortable if I wear jewelry and at the same time I think wear jewelry is not very convenient for my daily life, so I dislike conveyor jewelry.

✓ Now in fact, I don't like wearing jewelry always because I have sensitive skin and I feel some uncomfortable if I wear jewelry and at the same time I think wearing jewelry is not very convenient for my daily life, so I dislike conveyor jewelry.

动词后面接动名词形式（-ing）表示喜欢或不喜欢做某事，不能直接用动词原形。这里的 'like' 和 'think' 后面应该接 'wearing' 而不是 'wear'。

× Now in fact, I don't like wear jewelry always because I have sensitive skin and I feel some uncomfortable if I wear jewelry and at the same time I think wear jewelry is not very convenient for my daily life, so I dislike conveyor jewelry.

✓ Now in fact, I don't like wearing jewelry always because I have sensitive skin and I feel a bit uncomfortable if I wear jewelry and at the same time I think wearing jewelry is not very convenient for my daily life, so I dislike wearing jewelry.

'some uncomfortable' 用法错误，'uncomfortable' 是形容词，不能用 'some' 修饰，应改为 'a bit uncomfortable' 或 'some discomfort'。另外 'conveyor jewelry' 可能是误用，应改为 'wearing jewelry'。

× In fact, I like the golden jewelry, like the most of Chinese in China, golden is the symbol of expensive and many people would like to have some earrings and so on. Golden, golden jewelries. So I like that.

✓ In fact, I like golden jewelry, like most Chinese in China. Gold is the symbol of expensive things and many people would like to have some earrings and so on. Golden, golden jewelry. So I like that.

'the golden jewelry' 中 'jewelry' 是不可数名词，不用加冠词 'the'。'the most of Chinese' 应为 'most Chinese'。'golden jewelries' 中 'jewelry' 是不可数名词，不能加复数形式。

× Yes, I like buy jewelries except I dislike to wear them. I collect my jewelries just like some people collect stamps. It's make me very have a feel about successful. But I buy the jewelry is not so expensive, some like diamond and so on. It's just some cheap one. But that makes me really happy.

✓ Yes, I like to buy jewelry except I dislike wearing them. I collect my jewelry just like some people collect stamps. It makes me feel very successful. But the jewelry I buy is not so expensive, some like diamonds and so on. They're just some cheap ones. But that makes me really happy.

'jewelries' 错误，'jewelry' 是不可数名词，不用复数。'like buy' 应为 'like to buy'。'It's make me very have a feel about successful' 语法错误，应改为 'It makes me feel very successful'。'some like diamond' 应为 'some like diamonds'。

× Yes, I like buy jewelries except I dislike to wear them. I collect my jewelries just like some people collect stamps. It's make me very have a feel about successful. But I buy the jewelry is not so expensive, some like diamond and so on. It's just some cheap one. But that makes me really happy.

✓ Yes, I like to buy jewelry except I dislike wearing them. I collect my jewelry just like some people collect stamps. It makes me feel very successful. But the jewelry I buy is not so expensive, some like diamonds and so on. They're just some cheap ones. But that makes me really happy.

'dislike to wear' 应改为 'dislike wearing'，动词 'dislike' 后面通常接动名词形式。

× I think some people see that where jewelry of a long time as a habitat, for example, some people have some, uh, special jewelries like, uh, earrings for a specific simple, and they think bring them makes them more fortunately and that may makes them more comfortable.

✓ I think some people see that wearing jewelry for a long time is a habit. For example, some people have some special jewelry like earrings for a specific reason, and they think wearing them makes them more fortunate and that may make them more comfortable.

'see that where jewelry of a long time as a habitat' 语法错误，应改为 'see that wearing jewelry for a long time is a habit'。'jewelries' 错误，'jewelry' 是不可数名词。'bring them makes them more fortunately' 应改为 'wearing them makes them more fortunate'。