Jewelry— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you often wear jewelry?
수험생
As for me, I wear jewelry every day, uh, 'cause it's like a symbol for me, especially my earrings and bracelets.
시험관
What type of jewelry do you like?
수험생
To be honest, I really like Bratelets and I often, umm, ask my friends and my relatives to, uh, give me breathless as a present on each holiday.
시험관
Do you usually buy jewelry?
수험생
Honestly, I buy jewelry maybe once a year 'cause I don't have enough money to do it very often and I don't have scholarship. I don't work, I'm just a student.
시험관
Why do you think some people wear a piece of jewelry for a long time?
수험생
Wow, I think that it's like a symbol of something for them. Or maybe it's a present from a close friend or a relative and it close to their hearts.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you often wear jewelry?
점수: 75.0제안: Избегайте использования разговорных слов и пауз, таких как "uh" и "'cause". Старайтесь формулировать ответы более естественно и связно, используя полные предложения.
예시: I wear jewelry every day because it holds special meaning for me, particularly my earrings and bracelets.
What type of jewelry do you like?
점수: 60.0제안: Обратите внимание на правильное произношение и написание слов, таких как "bracelets". Избегайте ненужных пауз и слов-паразитов. Также старайтесь давать более развернутые и связные ответы.
예시: I really like bracelets, and I often ask my friends and relatives to give me bracelets as presents on special occasions.
Do you usually buy jewelry?
점수: 80.0제안: Старайтесь использовать более формальный стиль речи и избегать сокращений, таких как "'cause". Также можно улучшить связность ответа, используя связующие слова.
예시: I usually buy jewelry about once a year because I don't have enough money to buy it more often, as I am a student without a scholarship or a job.
Why do you think some people wear a piece of jewelry for a long time?
점수: 70.0제안: Избегайте междометий, таких как "Wow", в формальных ответах. Следите за грамматикой, например, используйте "it is close to their hearts". Добавьте связующие слова для плавности речи.
예시: I believe that some people wear jewelry for a long time because it symbolizes something important to them, or it might be a gift from a close friend or relative that is very dear to their hearts.
문법
× I really like Bratelets and I often, umm, ask my friends and my relatives to, uh, give me breathless as a present on each holiday.
✓ I really like bracelets and I often, umm, ask my friends and my relatives to, uh, give me bracelets as a present on each holiday.
The word 'Bratelets' and 'breathless' are incorrect spellings and plural forms. The correct plural form is 'bracelets'. Using the correct plural form is important for clarity and grammatical accuracy.
× Or maybe it's a present from a close friend or a relative and it close to their hearts.
✓ Or maybe it's a present from a close friend or a relative and it is close to their hearts.
The sentence is missing the verb 'is' before 'close to their hearts'. This is a sentence structure error where the linking verb is omitted, making the sentence incomplete. Adding 'is' corrects the sentence structure and meaning.
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