Geography— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is brief and natural, but to improve, try to provide a complete sentence and add a reason to make it more effective and informative. For example, explain why you like geography.

예시: I really enjoy geography because it helps me understand the world and different cultures better.

제안: Your answer is relevant and informative, but you can improve coherence by using linking words and correcting grammar. For example, use 'such as' and 'affect' instead of 'effects'.

예시: Yes, I think geography is useful because it helps us understand different features, such as climate and physical characteristics of various areas, and how these factors affect human life.

제안: Your answer is clear but can be improved by using more natural phrasing and linking words. Also, avoid redundancy and provide more specific details.

예시: Yes, I studied geography at school where we learned about different regions, patterns, and also studied maps of India.

제안: Your answer is understandable but incomplete and has grammatical errors. Try to complete your thoughts, use correct grammar, and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, I would love to be a geography teacher because it was one of my favorite subjects, and I want to share my knowledge with the next generation.

제안: Your answer has good content but contains repetition and some grammatical errors. Use linking words to improve coherence and correct phrases like 'has effect' to 'affects'.

예시: Yes, I would love to learn about the geography of other countries because it helps me understand their environment, how the climate affects the people, and their settlement styles.

× Yes, I think geography is useful to understand different features, different climate and physical features of different areas and also to understand how different factors effects human life.

✓ Yes, I think geography is useful to understand different features, different climates and physical features of different areas and also to understand how different factors affect human life.

The word 'climate' should be plural 'climates' because it refers to various types of climate in different areas. Also, 'effects' is a noun here, but the verb form 'affect' is needed to indicate influence. So, 'factors affect human life' is correct.

× Yes, I did learn it. When I was in my school, there was a subject as geography.

✓ Yes, I did learn it. When I was in my school, there was a subject called geography.

The phrase 'a subject as geography' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'a subject called geography' to indicate the name of the subject.

× Yes, I would love to be a geography teacher as it was one of my favorite subject and I will also love to teach it to the next generation and I think it is where.

✓ Yes, I would love to be a geography teacher as it was one of my favorite subjects and I will also love to teach it to the next generation and I think it is worthwhile.

The word 'subject' should be plural 'subjects' because it refers to one among many favorite subjects. Also, the sentence ends abruptly with 'I think it is where' which is unclear; replacing it with 'I think it is worthwhile' makes the sentence complete and meaningful.

× Yes, I will also love to learn about geographies of other countries as it as it will help me to understand the environment there as well as what climate has effect on the people living there and what is their settlement style.

✓ Yes, I will also love to learn about the geography of other countries as it will help me to understand the environment there as well as what climate has an effect on the people living there and what their settlement style is.

The word 'geographies' is incorrect here; 'geography' is an uncountable noun when referring to the study of the earth's features. Also, 'as it as it' is a repetition error and should be corrected to 'as it'. The phrase 'what climate has effect' needs the article 'an' before 'effect'. The sentence structure at the end is improved by changing 'what is their settlement style' to 'what their settlement style is'.