Geography— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it is a bit long and ends abruptly. Try to keep your answers concise and complete your thoughts. Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating similar ideas. For example, you mentioned 'how vast planet earth is' twice. Try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: I like geography because it helps me understand the vastness of our planet. Since I was a kid, I've especially enjoyed learning about the continents and their locations.

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant with good vocabulary. To improve, you can add more specific supporting details and use linking words to make your answer more coherent. For example, explain how geography helps with travel and navigation.

예시: Yes, geography is very useful because it helps us understand the diversity of our planet. For instance, it aids in travel and navigation by teaching us about different terrains and climates.

제안: Your answer provides relevant information but is somewhat repetitive and contains minor errors (e.g., 'Natural Geographic' should be 'National Geographic'). Try to avoid redundancy and use linking words to connect your ideas. Also, be careful with grammar and proper nouns.

예시: Yes, I have studied geography from elementary school through college. Additionally, I enjoy watching documentaries by National Geographic, which I find both fascinating and useful.

제안: Your answer is honest but a bit unclear and fragmented. Try to organize your ideas more clearly with linking words and avoid repeating similar phrases. Also, clarify your reasons more specifically.

예시: Although I love geography, I prefer being a student rather than a teacher because teaching requires in-depth knowledge that I currently lack. Moreover, I do not have enough time to commit to teaching.

제안: Your answer is positive but incomplete and somewhat repetitive. Try to complete your sentences and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific reasons or examples.

예시: Yes, I plan to learn more about the geography of other countries because I love to travel. Since learning is a lifelong journey, exploring different cultures and landscapes will always offer new knowledge.

× I like geography, it gives me a perspective of how vast planet earth is and since I was a kid I especially love learning about the continents, where they are located and.

✓ I like geography because it gives me a perspective of how vast planet Earth is, and since I was a kid, I have especially loved learning about the continents and where they are located.

The original sentence is a run-on sentence lacking proper conjunctions and punctuation. It also ends abruptly with 'and.' Correcting it requires joining clauses properly and completing the thought. Adding 'because' clarifies the relationship between ideas, and proper commas improve readability.

× Yes, I learned geography throughout my elementary school, junior high high school, and college.

✓ Yes, I learned geography throughout elementary school, junior high school, high school, and college.

The phrase 'junior high high school' is redundant and incorrect. Also, 'elementary school' and other school levels do not require 'my' when speaking generally. The correction removes redundancy and improves clarity.

× I've also learned geography watching documentaries by Natural Geographic and it is fascinating and also at the same time very useful.

✓ I've also learned geography by watching documentaries from National Geographic, and it is fascinating as well as very useful.

The phrase 'watching documentaries by Natural Geographic' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'by' for authorship but 'from' is used for sources like organizations. Also, the organization's name is 'National Geographic.' The sentence is improved by adding 'by' before 'watching' and correcting the source name.

× While I love geography and learning about it, I appreciate being a student of geography.

✓ While I love geography and learning about it, I appreciate being a student of it.

Repeating 'geography' twice in the same sentence is redundant. Using 'it' as a pronoun avoids repetition and improves sentence flow.

× As for being a teacher that requires an in-depth knowledge which I do not have at this moment and at this time.

✓ As for being a teacher, that requires in-depth knowledge which I do not have at this moment.

The original sentence is a fragment lacking a main verb. Adding a comma after 'teacher' and restructuring the sentence completes the thought. Also, 'at this moment and at this time' is redundant; one phrase suffices.

× I do not wish to be a geography teacher because of the time.

✓ I do not wish to be a geography teacher because of the time commitment.

The phrase 'because of the time' is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'commitment' clarifies the reason for not wishing to be a teacher.

× Yes, I anticipate to learn a lot more about the geography of other countries because I love to travel and learning is a lifelong journey.

✓ Yes, I anticipate learning a lot more about the geography of other countries because I love to travel, and learning is a lifelong journey.

The verb 'anticipate' is followed by a gerund (-ing form), not an infinitive. Therefore, 'anticipate to learn' is incorrect; it should be 'anticipate learning.'

× There's always something you can learn. With all the different cultures in this world and different countries, there's a lot to.

✓ There's always something you can learn. With all the different cultures and countries in this world, there's a lot to discover.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'there's a lot to.' It is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'discover' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.