Geography— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to use more natural phrasing and avoid grammatical errors. Instead of 'I am not interested to these kinds of things,' say 'I am not interested in this subject.' Also, provide a bit more detail to make your answer more engaging and complete.

예시: I didn't really enjoy geography because I found it less interesting compared to other subjects, and I wasn't very keen on learning about maps and places.

제안: Focus on clearer sentence structure and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, start with your opinion, then explain why, and give an example.

예시: I think geography is useful, especially for people who are interested in it because it can lead to careers like environmental science or urban planning.

제안: Improve grammar by using past tense consistently and avoid repetition. Also, add a little more detail to enrich your answer.

예시: Yes, I studied geography at school since it was a compulsory subject for all students, and I learned about different countries and their climates.

제안: Your answer is clear but could be more concise and natural. Use linking words like 'because' to connect your ideas smoothly and avoid repeating phrases.

예시: I don't want to be a geography teacher because I didn't enjoy the subject, and I believe it requires a lot of patience.

제안: Use correct tenses and clearer sentence structure. Avoid repeating 'in the future' twice. Also, link your ideas logically with words like 'however' or 'but'.

예시: At the moment, I'm busy with cooking classes, but in the future, I would like to learn more about the geography of other countries because I want to explore them.

× I did not like geography because I am not interested to these kinds of things.

✓ I did not like geography because I am not interested in these kinds of things.

The correct preposition to use with 'interested' is 'in', not 'to'. Therefore, 'interested to' is incorrect and should be replaced with 'interested in'.

× Well, I think it is useful for those persons who are interested in it and in the future they pursue a courses related to geography and.

✓ Well, I think it is useful for those people who are interested in it and in the future pursue courses related to geography.

The phrase 'those persons' is less natural than 'those people'. Also, 'a courses' is incorrect because 'courses' is plural and should not have the article 'a'. The sentence was also incomplete and needed restructuring for clarity.

× And start their career in these opportunities.

✓ They can start their careers in these opportunities.

The original sentence is a fragment and lacks a subject and verb. Adding 'They can' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× Well, when I was in school, geography is compulsory subject for all students.

✓ Well, when I was in school, geography was a compulsory subject for all students.

The sentence refers to a past time ('when I was in school'), so the verb 'is' should be in the past tense 'was'. Also, 'compulsory subject' needs the article 'a' before it.

× So I learned geography on school.

✓ So I learned geography at school.

The correct preposition to use with 'school' in this context is 'at', not 'on'.

× I don't like to be a geography teacher in the future.

✓ I don't want to be a geography teacher in the future.

The phrase 'like to be' is less natural here; 'want to be' better expresses the intention or desire not to become a geography teacher.

× Although I think it is very difficult job because it needs lots of patience.

✓ Although I think it is a very difficult job because it requires lots of patience.

The phrase 'very difficult job' needs the article 'a'. Also, 'needs' is acceptable but 'requires' is more appropriate in this context. 'Lots of patience' is correct.

× Well, now I was busy in my daily schedule and I'm pursuing my cooking classes.

✓ Well, now I am busy with my daily schedule and I'm pursuing my cooking classes.

The phrase 'now I was busy' mixes past tense with 'now'. It should be present tense 'I am busy'. Also, the correct preposition is 'busy with' not 'busy in'.

× But in the future I think I would like to learn about other countries because in the future I explore all the countries.

✓ But in the future, I think I would like to learn about other countries because I want to explore all the countries.

The phrase 'I explore all the countries' is incorrect for future intention. It should be 'I want to explore' or 'I will explore'. Also, 'in the future' is repeated unnecessarily.