Geography— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn. Hãy tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn. Bạn nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sau đó cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: I really enjoy geography because it helps me learn about different places around the world. For example, I can understand where countries are located and what their cultures are like. This makes me excited to travel and explore new destinations with my friends.

제안: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng hơn, tránh lặp từ và câu không rõ nghĩa. Hãy sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể để làm rõ ý của bạn.

예시: Yes, I believe geography is very useful because it helps students understand the world better. For instance, learning about Asian countries can teach us about their culture and environment, which is important for global awareness.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, tránh nhầm lẫn từ và cung cấp thông tin chính xác, rõ ràng hơn.

예시: Yes, I have studied geography for several years, and I think it is important to learn it throughout school until grade 12 because it helps us understand the world and different environments.

제안: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng và hoàn chỉnh hơn, tránh câu bị bỏ dở. Sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng ngữ pháp và từ vựng phù hợp để diễn đạt ý kiến của bạn một cách tự nhiên.

예시: I don't want to be a geography teacher because I am more interested in other subjects like science, which I find more useful for my future career.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng cần tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Hãy cung cấp lý do cụ thể và rõ ràng hơn cho câu trả lời của bạn.

예시: Yes, I will continue learning about the geography of other countries because it will help me plan trips with my family and friends. Also, I hope to become a tour guide in the future, so this knowledge will be very useful.

× I just love geography on my class because I think the teacher can teach me a lot of information and geography is negotiated to me.

✓ I just love geography in my class because I think the teacher can teach me a lot of information and geography is important to me.

The preposition 'on' is incorrectly used with 'class'; the correct preposition is 'in' when referring to subjects studied during a class. Also, 'negotiated' is incorrect in this context; 'important' or 'meaningful' would be appropriate.

× I really love it because it can send me any place to visit or have a good time with my friend.

✓ I really love it because it can take me to any place to visit or have a good time with my friends.

The pronoun 'it' cannot 'send' a person; 'take' is more appropriate. Also, 'friend' should be plural 'friends' to match the context of spending time with more than one person.

× I think I think geography is useful because now we have a job to share to the student, like teacher can share or teach you some places.

✓ I think geography is useful because now we have a job to share with the students, like teachers can share or teach you about some places.

The phrase 'share to the student' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'share with the students'. Also, 'teacher' should be plural 'teachers' to agree with the context.

× It was an Asian place to learn and I think it's good for students.

✓ It is an Asian place to learn and I think it's good for students.

The past tense 'was' is incorrect here because the statement is about a general fact; present tense 'is' should be used.

× I have been learning jewelry free for seven years and now I am continuing.

✓ I have been learning geography for seven years and now I am continuing.

The phrase 'learning jewelry free' is unclear and likely a mistake; it should be 'learning geography'. Also, 'continuing' should be 'continuing it' or 'continuing to learn' for clarity.

× I think it is a suggestion that you should learn on your school to 12 class and it very useful to you.

✓ I think it is recommended that you should learn at your school up to 12th grade and it is very useful to you.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect; 'at' is used for locations like school. Also, 'to 12 class' should be 'up to 12th grade' for clarity and correctness.

× I think I can't be a geography teacher because I think it have more subject or job that's useful more than geography.

✓ I think I can't be a geography teacher because I think there are more subjects or jobs that are more useful than geography.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrectly used; 'there are' is correct for plural subjects. Also, 'have' should be 'has' or 'there are' to agree with plural 'subjects or jobs'.

× So I think I can choose another subject like science or.

✓ So I think I can choose another subject like science.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'or' without completing the thought, which is a sentence structure error. The sentence should be completed or the 'or' removed.

× Yes, I will. I will learn more about the geography of the other countries because I can send it to my friends or share it to my parents to have a trip to visit or have a tour or I can be a tour guide in the future.

✓ Yes, I will. I will learn more about the geography of other countries because I can share it with my friends or my parents to plan a trip or have a tour, or I can be a tour guide in the future.

The verb 'send' is incorrect here; 'share' is appropriate. Also, the preposition 'to' should be 'with' when sharing information. The sentence is also long and can be improved by clearer conjunctions and punctuation.