Geography— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it could be more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy. Try to express your opinion directly and support it with a specific reason using linking words for coherence.

예시: I'm not very fond of geography because I find memorising place names and capitals quite dull compared to other subjects.

제안: Your answer is relevant and includes supporting details, but some phrases are unclear or awkward, such as 'understanding our work from global climate to control diversity'. Try to use precise vocabulary and clear linking words to improve coherence.

예시: Yes, definitely. Geography is essential for understanding global issues like climate change, biodiversity conservation, urban planning, and disaster management.

제안: Your answer is well-structured and informative. To improve, you could add a linking word to connect your ideas smoothly and use more varied vocabulary.

예시: Yes, I studied geography at school until grade 9. We covered various topics such as map reading, continents, and ecosystems, which gave me useful knowledge that still benefits me today.

제안: Your answer is clear and honest but a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to make your point more directly and use linking words to improve flow.

예시: No, I wouldn't want to be a geography teacher because I lack passion for the subject and prefer to focus on areas where I feel more enthusiastic.

제안: Your answer is natural and relevant. To improve, try to use linking words to connect your ideas more smoothly and avoid repeating similar phrases.

예시: I will probably learn about other countries' geography casually through travel, by exploring their climate, landmarks, and cultures, but I don't plan to study it formally again.

× I recognize that it is essential for understanding our work from global climate to control diversity.

✓ I recognize that it is essential for understanding our world, from global climate to biodiversity control.

The phrase 'our work from global climate to control diversity' is incorrect due to the misuse of prepositions and word choice. 'Our work' should be 'our world' to make sense in context. Also, 'control diversity' is awkward; the correct term is 'biodiversity control' or 'biodiversity'. The preposition 'from' is correctly used to indicate a range, but the objects in the range need to be appropriate and correctly phrased.

× Probably only in a casual way because I enjoy traveling and discovering other countries so I can naturally learn about the geography of them, things like climate, landmarks and cultural regions.

✓ Probably only in a casual way because I enjoy traveling and discovering other countries so I can naturally learn about their geography, things like climate, landmarks and cultural regions.

The phrase 'the geography of them' is awkward and incorrect in formal English. The correct prepositional phrase is 'their geography' to indicate possession. Using 'of them' is less natural and can be considered incorrect in this context.