Geography— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons using simple linking words. Avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

예시: I like geography because I have been studying it since the 6th grade. It is interesting to learn about different places and cultures. Also, I find it easy to understand, which makes it enjoyable for me.

제안: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by using better linking words and more specific details. Also, correct the grammar and avoid vague phrases like 'according to me'.

예시: Yes, I think geography is very useful, especially when travelling to new places. Moreover, understanding geographical conditions helps us prepare for weather changes and natural events.

제안: Your answer repeats information and has grammatical mistakes. Start with a clear topic sentence and add specific supporting details. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I have studied geography from the 6th to the 12th grade. During these six years, it became my favourite subject because I enjoyed learning about the earth and its features.

제안: Your answer is understandable but needs better grammar and clearer expression. Use linking words to explain your reasons and avoid repeating phrases.

예시: I do not want to be a geography teacher because I prefer learning about geography rather than teaching it. Teaching requires different skills that I am not interested in developing.

제안: Your answer is repetitive and grammatically incorrect. Try to express your intention clearly with correct tense and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: Yes, in the future, if I get the chance, I will definitely learn more about the geography of other countries. This will help me expand my knowledge and prepare better for my studies.

× I like geography independent, but the main reason of liking geography is that I studied it since my 6th class and that's why I like it and it's easy to learn to fall for me.

✓ I like geography independently, but the main reason for liking geography is that I have studied it since my 6th class and that's why I like it and it's easy for me to learn.

The word 'independent' is an adjective, but here an adverb 'independently' is needed to describe how the student likes geography. Also, 'main reason of liking' should be 'main reason for liking' as 'reason for' is the correct prepositional phrase. 'I studied it since my 6th class' should be 'I have studied it since my 6th class' to indicate an action continuing from past to present. 'It's easy to learn to fall for me' is incorrect; it should be 'it's easy for me to learn' to correctly express ease of learning.

× Yes, according to me, geography is very useful for a person while travelling through different places and day by day the importance of geographical condition are increasing.

✓ Yes, in my opinion, geography is very useful for a person while travelling to different places and day by day the importance of geographical conditions is increasing.

'According to me' is not a correct phrase; 'in my opinion' is appropriate. 'Travelling through different places' should be 'travelling to different places' as 'to' indicates destination. 'Geographical condition' should be plural 'conditions' to match the context. Also, 'importance ... are increasing' is incorrect subject-verb agreement; 'importance ... is increasing' is correct.

× Yes, that I mentioned before that I learning geographic since 6th class and till my 12th class.

✓ Yes, as I mentioned before, I have been learning geography since 6th class until my 12th class.

The phrase 'I learning' is incorrect; it should be 'I have been learning' to indicate continuous action from past to present. 'Geographic' should be 'geography' as the noun form is needed. 'Till' is acceptable but 'until' is more formal. The sentence structure is improved by adding 'as' and commas for clarity.

× I learned geography from these six years and that's the part that's the best subject I ever learned in my whole educational life.

✓ I learned geography for six years and that's the best subject I have ever learned in my whole educational life.

'From these six years' is incorrect; 'for six years' correctly expresses duration. 'That's the part that's the best subject' is awkward; 'that's the best subject' is clearer. 'I ever learned' should be 'I have ever learned' to express experience up to now.

× According to me, I don't want to be an geographic teacher because I have interest in learning geography, not interesting in teaching geography.

✓ In my opinion, I don't want to be a geography teacher because I am interested in learning geography, not interested in teaching geography.

'According to me' is incorrect; 'In my opinion' is correct. 'An geographic teacher' should be 'a geography teacher' because 'geography' starts with a consonant sound. 'I have interest' should be 'I am interested' to correctly express feelings. 'Not interesting in teaching' should be 'not interested in teaching'.

× Yes, in future if I had chance to learn more geographic about other countries, I definitely I definitely learn it and help my mind more for this preparation or this type of geographical learning and education.

✓ Yes, in the future, if I have a chance to learn more about the geography of other countries, I will definitely learn it and it will help my mind more in this preparation or this type of geographical learning and education.

'In future' should be 'in the future' with the definite article. 'If I had chance' is incorrect; it should be 'if I have a chance' for a real possibility. 'More geographic about other countries' should be 'more about the geography of other countries' for correct noun usage. 'I definitely I definitely learn it' is repetitive and missing future tense; 'I will definitely learn it' is correct. 'Help my mind more for this preparation' should be 'help my mind more in this preparation' for correct preposition use.