Geography— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时应避免语法错误和表达不清，句子应更连贯自然。可以先直接回答喜欢地理，然后用具体细节支持，比如喜欢学习不同地方和人们的文化。

예시: I really like geography because it helps me learn about different places and the unique cultures of people around the world. For example, I enjoy discovering how people dress differently in various countries.

제안: 回答缺乏逻辑和清晰表达，应直接回答问题并给出理由。可以说明自己觉得地理知识不实用的原因，并用具体例子支持。

예시: I don't think geography is very useful for me because I haven't studied it deeply, so I don't see how it applies to my daily life.

제안: 回答时应避免重复和语法错误，句子应更简洁自然。可以直接说明自己学过地理，并解释其在中国教育中的重要性。

예시: Yes, I have learned geography. In China, geography is a compulsory subject in both junior and senior high school because it is considered very important.

제안: 回答不够连贯且有语法错误，应直接表达不想当地理老师的原因，并用具体细节支持。

예시: Probably not, because when I was a senior high school student, I found geography quite difficult and my grades were low. Teaching it requires strong knowledge, which I don't have.

제안: 回答时应避免重复，表达更自然。可以直接说明不打算深入学习其他国家地理，并给出理由和替代兴趣。

예시: Probably not, because geography doesn't interest me much. If I have free time, I prefer to do other activities like cooking instead of studying geography of other countries.

× my favorite subject is geography because in this lesson I can learn a lot of knowledge about the in the different place and the people have different costume and.

✓ my favorite subject was geography because in this lesson I could learn a lot of knowledge about different places and people have different costumes.

这里描述的是过去的情况，应该使用过去时态。'is'应改为'was'，'can'应改为'could'，'place'应为复数'places'，'costume'应为复数'costumes'。

× my favorite subject is geography because in this lesson I can learn a lot of knowledge about the in the different place and the people have different costume and.

✓ my favorite subject was geography because in this lesson I could learn a lot of knowledge about different places and people have different costumes.

'place'和'costume'应使用复数形式，因为指的是多个地方和多种服装。

× my favorite subject is geography because in this lesson I can learn a lot of knowledge about the in the different place and the people have different costume and.

✓ my favorite subject was geography because in this lesson I could learn a lot of knowledge about different places and people have different costumes.

'about the in the different place'中介词使用错误，应去掉多余的'the'和'in the'，改为'about different places'。

× Not because I don't learn it very deep.

✓ No, because I don't study it very deeply.

'Not because'表达不完整，应改为'No, because'。'learn it very deep'中'deep'应为副词形式'deeply'，且通常用'study'代替'learn'表示学习学科。

× my favorite subject is geography because in this lesson I can learn a lot of knowledge about the in the different place and the people have different costume and.

✓ my favorite subject was geography because in this lesson I could learn a lot of knowledge about different places and people have different costumes.

句中描述过去的情况，动词时态应为过去时。

× So in the daily I don't know what is used to, so I don't have any idea about what it can use in some angles.

✓ So in daily life, I don't know what it is used for, so I don't have any idea about how it can be used in some aspects.

'in the daily'应为'in daily life'，'what is used to'应为'what it is used for'，'in some angles'应为'in some aspects'。

× So in the daily I don't know what is used to, so I don't have any idea about what it can use in some angles.

✓ So in daily life, I don't know what it is used for, so I don't have any idea about how it can be used in some aspects.

'what is used to'缺少主语，应补充'it'，并调整句子结构使其通顺。

× my favorite subject is geography because in this lesson I can learn a lot of knowledge about the in the different place and the people have different costume and.

✓ my favorite subject was geography because in this lesson I could learn a lot of knowledge about different places and people have different costumes.

描述过去经历，动词应使用过去时态。

× I would say yeah, I think if you study in the China, China, you must study the geography because when you are a junior high school student, the geography is an essential subject.

✓ I would say yes, I think if you study in China, you must study geography because when you are a junior high school student, geography is an essential subject.

'would say yeah'中'yeah'应改为正式的'yes'，'the China'错误，国家名前不加冠词，'the geography'应去掉定冠词。

× the geography is an essential subject.

✓ geography is an essential subject.

学科名称前一般不加定冠词'the'。

× What's more, in the Senior High School is must too.

✓ What's more, in Senior High School it is a must too.

'is must'表达错误，应为'it is a must'，'the Senior High School'应去掉定冠词。

× in the Senior High School is must too.

✓ in Senior High School it is a must too.

学校名称前一般不加定冠词'the'。

× Why was a Senior High School student? I studied geography but my girls were usually quite low so I found it very difficult because teaching geography requires strong knowledge in the subject.

✓ When I was a Senior High School student, I studied geography but my grades were usually quite low so I found it very difficult because teaching geography requires strong knowledge in the subject.

'Why was a Senior High School student?'句子结构错误，应为'When I was a Senior High School student'。'girls'应为'grades'。

× my girls were usually quite low so I found it very difficult

✓ my grades were usually quite low so I found it very difficult

'girls'错误，应为'grades'表示成绩。

× Why was a Senior High School student?

✓ When I was a Senior High School student,

句子缺少主语和时间状语，正确表达应为'When I was a Senior High School student'。

× I don't think it would be my strengths.

✓ I don't think it would be my strength.

'strengths'复数形式不合适，表示能力时通常用单数'strength'。

× Probably not, because the knowledge of geography is not attracting me a lot.

✓ Probably not, because the knowledge of geography does not attract me much.

'is not attracting me'时态和语态不当，应使用一般现在时'does not attract me'。

× So for me for me, if I have some free time, I will choose some interesting things like cooking or other things, but not study the knowledge about the geography of other countries.

✓ So for me, if I have some free time, I will choose some interesting things like cooking or other activities, but not study the geography of other countries.

重复'for me'，应去掉一个；'things'重复且不具体，改为'activities'更合适；'study the knowledge about the geography'表达冗余，简化为'study the geography'。