Geography— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and try to link your ideas smoothly. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why geography is useful for travel and understanding environmental issues, using linking words like 'because' or 'as'.

예시: I enjoy studying geography because it helps me plan international trips effectively. For instance, understanding different climates and environmental issues allows me to prepare better for my travels.

제안: Your answer repeats ideas and has some grammatical errors. Try to avoid redundancy and structure your answer clearly. Use linking words like 'because' to explain why geography is useful, and be specific about what aspects you find important.

예시: Yes, I believe geography is very useful because it helps us understand climate change and how landscapes evolve over time, which affects our environment and daily lives.

제안: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by using more natural phrasing and linking words. For example, use 'and' or 'also' to connect ideas smoothly, and avoid awkward expressions like 'I get knowledge'.

예시: Yes, I studied geography at school as part of the curriculum, and I also learn more through online apps and websites, which are convenient and keep me updated.

제안: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and unclear phrasing. Use correct verb forms and clearer sentences. Start with a direct answer, then explain why you want to teach geography, using linking words like 'because' or 'as'.

예시: Yes, I would like to be a geography teacher because I enjoy sharing knowledge about countries and landscapes. Teaching geography can also help others with travel and navigation skills.

제안: Your answer is good but could be more natural and concise. Use plural forms correctly ('navigation skills') and link your ideas smoothly. Avoid repeating 'also' unnecessarily.

예시: Yes, I plan to learn more about the geography of other countries because I love international travel. This knowledge improves my navigation skills and helps me plan trips by checking weather and climate conditions in advance.

× I like to read geography a lot because it's very essential and useful whenever I plan travel internationally.

✓ I like reading geography a lot because it's very essential and useful whenever I plan to travel internationally.

The verb 'like' is commonly followed by the gerund form '-ing' when expressing general preferences. Also, 'plan travel' is incorrect; it should be 'plan to travel' because 'plan' is followed by the infinitive form of the verb.

× It's helped me a lot.

✓ It has helped me a lot.

The contraction 'It's' stands for 'It is' or 'It has'. Here, the present perfect tense requires 'It has helped' rather than 'It is helped'. Using 'It has helped' correctly indicates an action that has relevance to the present.

× Also, we have to learn about, uh, climate change and environmental issues.

✓ Also, we have to learn about climate change and environmental issues.

The comma after 'about' is unnecessary and interrupts the flow of the sentence. Removing it improves clarity and correctness.

× Yes, definitely, I said earlier is very useful and crucial because everyone should know about their climate change, different countries and their landscape changes day by day, which is very crucial.

✓ Yes, definitely, as I said earlier, it is very useful and crucial because everyone should know about climate change, different countries, and their landscape changes day by day, which is very important.

The original sentence lacks proper subject and verb agreement and has awkward phrasing. Adding 'as I said earlier' clarifies the reference. 'It is' correctly refers to geography. 'Their climate change' is incorrect; 'climate change' is general and does not belong to 'their'. Also, 'which is very crucial' is repetitive; 'important' is a better choice here.

× Yes, in my school it is a crucial part of school curriculum and also I get knowledge from online apps and through websites which is convenient and keeps me updated.

✓ Yes, in my school it is a crucial part of the school curriculum and also I get knowledge from online apps and websites, which are convenient and keep me updated.

'School curriculum' should be preceded by 'the' to specify it. 'Online apps and websites' is plural, so the relative pronoun should be 'which are' and the verb 'keep' should agree in plural form.

× Yes, definitely having geographical knowledge is very useful and I love to taught everyone about countries and their landscape.

✓ Yes, definitely having geographical knowledge is very useful and I love to teach everyone about countries and their landscapes.

'Love to taught' is incorrect; 'taught' is past tense and past participle. The correct infinitive form is 'to teach'. Also, 'landscape' should be plural to match 'countries'.

× Also it's help us do our trip and navigation.

✓ Also, it helps us with our trips and navigation.

'It's' is a contraction for 'it is' or 'it has', but here the verb should be 'helps' to agree with singular subject 'it'. Also, 'help us do our trip' is awkward; 'helps us with our trips' is more natural. 'Trip' should be plural to generalise.

× Yes, definitely, because I love to travel internationally and it's very useful for navigation skill and we can plan our trip before.

✓ Yes, definitely, because I love to travel internationally and it's very useful for navigation skills and we can plan our trips beforehand.

'Navigation skill' should be plural 'navigation skills' as it refers to general ability. 'Plan our trip before' is awkward; 'plan our trips beforehand' is more natural and grammatically correct.

× Also we can check the weather and climate changes.

✓ Also, we can check the weather and climate change.

'Climate change' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralised as 'climate changes'. Adding a comma after 'Also' improves sentence flow.