Geography— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答が長くて冗長になっています。質問に対して直接的な答えを最初に述べ、その後に理由を簡潔に説明しましょう。また、文法の誤りを修正し、自然な表現を使うことが重要です。

예시: I don't like geography because I find it difficult. Also, I didn't do well in it at elementary school, and it is not related to my current job.

제안: 回答は比較的明確ですが、接続詞を使って文をつなげるとより自然で論理的になります。また、具体的な例をもう少し詳しく述べると良いでしょう。

예시: Yes, I think geography is useful because it helps us find interesting tourist spots when we travel abroad. For example, knowing about different countries' locations and cultures can make traveling more enjoyable.

제안: 文法の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。過去形の使い方や表現を正しくし、簡潔に答えましょう。

예시: Yes, I studied geography in junior high school. It was difficult, and I didn't understand why I had to study it, but now I regret not studying it harder.

제안: 文法の誤りを直し、理由を明確に述べると良いです。また、冗長な表現を避け、簡潔に答えましょう。

예시: No, I don't want to be a geography teacher because many students don't like the subject, so teaching it would be very difficult and tiring.

제안: 回答は明確ですが、「useless」という言葉は少し強すぎるので、より柔らかい表現を使うと良いでしょう。また、理由をもう少し詳しく述べると自然です。

예시: No, I probably won't learn more about geography because, although it is interesting and useful for some people, it is not related to my job. I teach calligraphy and science at an elementary school, so I focus on those subjects.

× I don't like geography, it is difficult, so I didn't get good score at an elementary school, so now I don't like geography and it is not related to my job.

✓ I don't like geography because it is difficult. I didn't get a good score at elementary school, so now I don't like geography and it think it is not related to my job.

The original sentence is a run-on sentence with multiple independent clauses joined incorrectly by commas and 'so'. It should be divided into clearer sentences or connected properly with conjunctions. Also, 'good score' needs an article 'a'.

× I didn't get good score at an elementary school

✓ I didn't get a good score at elementary school

The phrase 'good score' requires the indefinite article 'a' because it refers to a singular, countable noun. Also, 'at an elementary school' is better as 'at elementary school' when referring to the general level of education.

× Yes, I have run geography at junior high school.

✓ Yes, I have studied geography at junior high school.

The verb 'run' is incorrect here; the correct past participle verb to use is 'studied' to indicate learning a subject. 'Have run' is not appropriate for learning a subject.

× I have no I had no idea why I study geography but I I regret studying geography hard.

✓ I had no idea why I studied geography, but I regret studying it hard.

The sentence has repetition and tense inconsistency. 'I have no I had no idea' is incorrect; it should be 'I had no idea'. Also, 'study' should be past tense 'studied' to match the past context. 'Studying geography hard' is awkward; 'studying it hard' is clearer.

× Many students don't like study geography, so it is very difficult to teach them geography.

✓ Many students don't like studying geography, so it is very difficult to teach them geography.

After 'don't like', the verb should be in the gerund form 'studying', not the base form 'study'.

× Many students is tiring.

✓ Many students are tiring.

The subject 'Many students' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number.