Geography— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by correcting grammar and avoiding redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific about what you like.

예시: I like geography because it covers various topics, and among them, climate change interests me the most.

제안: Improve sentence structure and grammar. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and provide specific reasons why geography is useful.

예시: Yes, geography is definitely useful because it helps us understand the environment and how societies interact with nature.

제안: Make your answer more natural by correcting grammar and using linking words. Be specific about how geography helps you in your studies.

예시: Yes, I study geography daily because it provides important information about the environment, which is very helpful for my academic work.

제안: Your answer is a bit repetitive and unclear. Try to express your ideas clearly with proper grammar and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect your thoughts.

예시: Yes, I want to be a geography teacher in the future because I am very interested in the subject and enjoy sharing knowledge about it with others.

제안: Improve sentence structure and grammar. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and specify why learning about other countries' geography is important for your future.

예시: Yes, I want to learn about the geography of other countries because it will help me become a better geography teacher in the future.

× Yes, I like geography because there are different type of subject in geography and climate change is my favorite task in geography.

✓ Yes, I like geography because there are different types of subjects in geography and climate change is my favorite topic in geography.

The phrase 'different type of subject' is incorrect because 'type' should be plural 'types' when referring to more than one, and 'subject' should be plural 'subjects' to match. Also, 'task' is not appropriate here; 'topic' fits better in this context.

× Yes definitely geography is useful because there are many aspects which is helpful for human being.

✓ Yes, definitely geography is useful because there are many aspects which are helpful for human beings.

The relative pronoun 'which' refers to 'aspects' which is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, 'human being' should be plural 'human beings' to refer generally to people.

× Most of human like to want more about geography because it is related to environment and nature of society.

✓ Most humans like to know more about geography because it is related to the environment and the nature of society.

'Most of human' is incorrect; it should be 'Most humans'. The phrase 'like to want more' is redundant and incorrect; 'like to know more' is appropriate. Also, 'environment' and 'nature' need definite articles 'the' before them.

× Yes, I learned geography on daily basis because it is important to learn.

✓ Yes, I learn geography on a daily basis because it is important to learn.

The question is about habitual action, so present tense 'learn' is appropriate instead of past tense 'learned'. Also, 'on daily basis' needs the article 'a' to be 'on a daily basis'.

× Also geography provide different type of information which is related to environment also helpful in my study.

✓ Also, geography provides different types of information which are related to the environment and also helpful in my study.

'Geography' is singular, so the verb should be 'provides'. 'Different type' should be plural 'different types'. 'Information' is uncountable but 'types of information' is correct. 'Which is' should be 'which are' to agree with plural 'types'. Also, 'environment' needs the article 'the'.

× Yes, I like to be a geography teacher in the future because I like different type of subject which is related to geography and there is much interest in geography than I prefer to be a teacher in future of geography which is very interesting for me.

✓ Yes, I want to be a geography teacher in the future because I like different types of subjects which are related to geography and I have more interest in geography, so I prefer to be a geography teacher in the future, which is very interesting for me.

'Different type of subject' should be 'different types of subjects'. The verb 'is' should be 'are' to agree with plural 'subjects'. 'There is much interest' is awkward; 'I have more interest' is better. The sentence structure is improved for clarity and correctness.

× Yes, I like to learn geography of other country because in future I like to be a teacher of geography, then I prefer to learn more about geography which is helpful for me in my future.

✓ Yes, I like to learn the geography of other countries because in the future I want to be a geography teacher, so I prefer to learn more about geography which will be helpful for me in my future.

'Geography of other country' should be 'geography of other countries' to indicate plural. 'In future' needs the article 'the' to be 'in the future'. 'Like to be' is better as 'want to be' for clarity. 'Then' is better replaced with 'so' to show cause and effect. 'Which is helpful' is better as 'which will be helpful' to indicate future relevance.